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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens: The Scaled Bits

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Abnagbeyl on July 28, 2012
    Speaking of Theo, whatever happened to Nott? You made it out as though he were in love with Blaise in the beginning of the story. Will he be making a return apperence?
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  • From dominique1 on July 28, 2012
    this was brilliant love max's poor richard
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  • From bloodshound on July 28, 2012
    Do both Doms and Subs get guided through their first hunt or only the Dom's? Har's hunting doesn't count as he wasn't raised Dracken and was running on pure instinct.
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  • From ANON - Weirdredstreak on July 28, 2012
    Awesome, can I recommend showing Ashleigh and Her mates with the whole incident in Part 46: control. It could be interesting because it would show how their emotions change so much towards Harry. Another recommendations would be to show what Harry's other mates were thinking during the choosing of the mates.

    Anyway it is great so far hoping for more as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - Jaylynn on July 18, 2012
    Yeah, I like the actual version on 53 much much better. This one would have broke something in the family. I can imagine Harry feeling bad enough about attacking Salex and needing to make it up to him somehow once he remembered but killing him would have taken a long time for him to get over, if he ever did.
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  • From ANON - Gayle on July 17, 2012
    What happened to Rise of the Drackens? The story has disappeared from your list of stories and the most recent chapter that I read this morning is gone as well.
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  • From ANON - Dxinsider on July 17, 2012
    Why did you remove your Fic "The Rise of the Drackens"? Please tell me you are going to put it back. I love that fic.
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  • From Krucksue on July 17, 2012
    Is anyone having problems accessing the original fic "Rise of the Drackens"? I'll be extremely upset if I can't finish reading the story. It is in my top five and I've been reading fan fiction for 4 years. Ugh
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  • From ANON - SpiritOfBeyond on July 16, 2012
    I confess, when I read the final version of Chapter 53, I thought they weren't all going to make it. I am much more pleased with the final version, than this alternate ending, and I can't imagine how you must feel, to have written this absolutely heart-wrenching and dark birth scene before toning it down and back to something a bit more... pleasant :)

    I can't wait until the next installment of both the Scaled Bits and the rest of the story!!

    ~Spiritxx
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on July 15, 2012
    I am glad that you went with the chapter that you did for the main story because the repercussions of killing Sanex would have been huge for Harry and the family, but i am also glad you decided to post this because it really is great writing, the fact that you can write a chapter like this is pretty awesome!! Thanks for posting both of them :)
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on July 14, 2012
    Thank goodness you did not go with this chapter. It powerful and horrendous. Harry when he came back to his senses would not have been able to live with himself or forgive himself. The final edited and published chapter 53 you did use is more in keeping with the character of Harry that you had in all the prior 52 chapters. But sometimes an author has to explore the deepest, darkest parts of the soul before pulling back and editing towards the grayer areas of humanity. Thank you once again for the chapter that you did ultimately post to the 'Main' story line.
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  • From Mithryl on July 13, 2012
    I am sooooo glad you edited I it. Still well written - but very depressing.
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  • From Zx14ninja on July 13, 2012
    yeah, I'm really, really glad you didn't make this the actual chapter. I'm not sure Harry would have survied the death of 2 of his babies AND finding out that he killed Nasta's brother while feral.
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  • From ANON - sarah999 on July 13, 2012
    I love the chapter between Max and Ceaser. Are you planning on doing a chapter where Ceaser puts Amelle in her place and 'grow some balls'. as you put it? : ) Or one with some in depth interaction between Harry and Myron and Richard, or Alexander, or Aneirin?
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  • From HeartStar on July 12, 2012
    so sad but i like the first ending better I just worry about the last baby...
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