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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens: The Scaled Bits

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Meechypoo on April 20, 2014
    Harry's children really are little treasures. I love the way they're all so different but still take time to watch out for each other. They are quite simply adorable but how could they not be with such brilliant and loveable parents. Thanks for the Easter surprise.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - April on April 20, 2014
    You did it again star, you swiped me right off my feet and into your world that you created your such a great writer! Thank you so much for all your hard work
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  • From sharii1993 on April 20, 2014
    what type of drackens are Braiden and farren dom or sub ?

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  • From ANON - Thumper56 on April 11, 2014
    You really are an amazing writer. I love this family and reading about all the things they're up to. As I was reading I thought how much I like Leolin or Braiden or Farren or Harry and the dads. It's like catching up with a good friend every time I see an update. A perfect pick me up at the end of a rough week. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - MaryRoyale on April 09, 2014
    For Ch. 36 "Daddies' Little Helpers"

    Well... to be honest I realized I was a little behind on your Scaled Bits and I think I read three or four chapters at once. I always love seeing these little peeks into the future (and sometimes the past), and they're always very well done and so carefully thought out. I have to commend you for all of the hard work and planning you've put into your story.

    There's just one thing. It isn't a criticism at all; it's more a question. You've hinted at Molly's birth several times in your Scaled Bits chapters so that we know that Something Happened which caused Molly's 'sac mates' (I love that by the way!) to die. It's obviously incredibly painful to Harry and his mates. In fact, it is so painful that they usually try to stop thinking about it or push those sad memories to the back of their minds. I know you won't say *right now* what happened, but I'm wondering if you'll share it in the future either as a Scaled Bits chapter OR as part of Rise of the Drackens?

    Thank you so much for all of your hard work. I've appreciated reading this story for some time now, and I definitely appreciate how much research and effort you always put into all of your stories. It's just that Rise of the Drackens was the first story of yours that I read so it will always hold a special place for me. :)
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  • From ANON - SpiritOfBeyond on April 04, 2014
    Oh I ADORED 'Sibling Rivalry'!! Loved seeing the grown up kids and their interactions with their siblings.

    I've just caught one typo, in the last section, where Braiden is thinking about how his parents tried to "elevate his fears" at going through his transformation, I think you mean "alleviate".

    Fantastic chapter, I'm excited to see what other Scaled Bits you have for us in store!

    ~Spiritxx
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  • From ANON - Viral on April 03, 2014
    I hate you forever for not telling us the colour of Braiden's wiiiiiiiiiiiings! *rolls around on the floor* But this does bring up a question I've been having... If one of Harry's kids is a submissive, where will they hold the meetings? What about the other kids? Will they know what's going on?

    Just so you know, I totally love you and the story and I check at least once a week too see if you have a new chapter
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  • From Jan on April 03, 2014
    Oh wow, that was a really sweet chapter ^_^ I can't wait to read more please update chapter 38 soon.


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  • From ANON - spaz666 on April 03, 2014
    You evil writer you! All that build-up and you leave out if Braiden is a Dominant or Submissive! You talked about the scales on his hands but not his wings. You said they were flesh colored, which is not much of a help because it it that he turned out pale like Harry so his white Submissive scales blend in or is it that he is more Blaise's skin tone with a corresponding color scheme? ..... I just keep confusing myself so I'm going to go with my first guess of Braiden being a Submissive.

    I think.

    You're so good at leaving me hanging!!! Love your stories!!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on April 02, 2014
    This was such a lovely chapter. We often get to see through one of the mate's eyes but it is special time indeed as we got great insight into some of the older siblings this time. I really enjoyed learning more about each of the children and how they dealt with each other. Thank you so much for this. I did notice you were mighty sneaky in that you never gave us even a hint as to whether Braiden ended up as a submissive or dominant Dracken. Personally I feel he would make a wonderful submissive Dracken but maybe one day we'll be lucky enough to find out.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - April on April 02, 2014
    Bravo can't wait for his first meeting and then we get to see what colors he got for his wings
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  • From ANON - drackenlover10802 on April 02, 2014
    I so love your world. When I first started to read your story last week, I thought, maybe it will be finished when I actually reach the end. Now I read the scaled bits too, and I am so happy to know, there is no end near. I also want to thank you for the wonderful story and I hope to read a lot more :) Did you ever write a chapter with Nastas point of view? I so loved Max' story. Again thank you and have a very nice evening.
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  • From ANON - Susanna on April 02, 2014
    Did I miss the part where you say if Braiden is a dominant or
    a submissive or did you just not reveal that yet?
    Love this story and can't wait for the next chapter:)

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  • From ANON - Seliki on April 02, 2014
    I love this the in between parts are wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Atty on March 28, 2014
    I LOVED this chapter it was so sweet! I kinda teared up
    And yayyy more Fairy babies!!
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