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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens: The Scaled Bits

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From Jan on March 27, 2014
Wow, this has got to be one of my favorite chappy, love how all the kids help, and play together, please update cheater 37 soon ^_^
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From ANON - Louise on March 27, 2014
Hope this isn't a duplicate. It looked like my computer hung up the first time I sent this review.
I enjoyed these vignettes. The idea of 4 of the quintuplets being in their NEWT year really emphasizes the range of ages though this chapter. Thank you for a fun read. It really made me smile.
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From ANON - Seliki on March 26, 2014
I always look forward to seeing additions to this because the in between stories are just as fascinating as the main. This is great.
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From ANON - jackie b 123 on March 26, 2014
This. Was. My. FAVORITE. Chapter of the Scaled Bits in a lng while! I could have absolutely waited on reading Peace because I'm not in too much of a hurry for anymore babies (this is me hoping poor Harry has a break from baby making after A&E!) But this chapter was so totally awesome, and I love seeing this far into the future of this amazing family.
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From BAFan on March 26, 2014
Ch. 36

I think my heart just melted.... This was simply wonderful.
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From ANON - natesa on March 23, 2014
Loved this chapter!! Was Draco's infertility caused by the potions he was taking to suppress his inner Dracken? Remember Snape telling him there would be some side effects from taking the potion but I can't really remember what he said they were...I'm going to have to go back and re-read it :) Oh and I heard that you haven't been feeling well lately, hope you take some time and take care of yourself. Get well soon!
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From ANON - kelo on March 21, 2014
Thanks for all your chapters (main fic and scaled bits). It's a real pleasure to read the story. I would like to thank you and, please, can you accept my invitation on FB (i send you an invitation as Isabelle Eloise) so i can read the information you write only in FB ?
Thaks a lot, once again
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From ANON - Kat on March 21, 2014
I looooove your work!!! I hope that you know how much I appreciate seeing your stories and how much work you put into them. All of your stories make me smile (or cry depending on the chapter ;) ). I know how much pressure some people put on you to update, update, update, but I hope you take time for you because you're too good to stop. Keep up the good work (but work on your schedule). =)
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From ANON - Girl on March 20, 2014
Eventhough I know you would expect it but yes I do feel quite disappointed. Six children feels like so saddening. Yes, you've made it clear that Draco will love all his children equally no matter what but it feels like you're quite biased against Draco. He even had to SHARE his first mating with Harry. It's like he wouldn't even get a quarter of the total number of children. I'm not sure maybe you're going to show that he's less fertile but I feel if you wished to make such a horrible plot, why Draco? He didn't get the first round with Harry and Harry told Lucius that it was Draco's fault. Then instead of talking about it Harry immediately said NO when Draco implied how he wished to raise his daughters, instead of talking it over. Even the twins which I was holding my breath for turns out to be Max, when he was the least deserving at the time eventhough Harry forgave him. Maybe it's not your intention or you get tired of people complaining about Draco that's why you decide to be horrible to him but wow. My favourite is not even Draco and I feel so horribly hurt for him. Like he's getting the short end of the stick.

I even agree with Lucius slightly, I mean yes, it's obvious Draco doesn't care but it still doesn't mean it's fair. And somehow his lack of children is going to be blamed once again on Draco. I may be wrong though. Since I'm not sure what direction you're pointing too but that's what I'm guessing.

I feel that Blaise would be the one with the most number of children, because you do seem to favour him the most. Though for me, I love Nasta. I haven't seen the number for each because I'm kind of afraid I may be right about Blaise or worse, they all get equal number of babies and once again Draco gets the short end of the stick. It's horrible, maybe he won't feel bad about it but soon you'd wonder what you're lacking, you know? Or why you don't deserve as much children as the rest or why fate decide to make you less fertile. (Once again, this is my assumption)

Sorry I've never reviewed like this before, it sounds like I'm complaining but I've never felt this sad for a character before though technically, nothing very bad seems to happen to him. I guess when it comes to a harem I like each character to be treated fairly and I can see Draco won't be. I know that the number of children Draco gets won't changed and there may be a reason for it, but god, haiz I never felt so depressed for a character, especially for DRACO. But I will still be reading because I love your writing at least that won't change either.
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From ANON - Lyoness on March 20, 2014
Well - you feel like your readers are complaining because you need more than 89 chapters to get to a point where they feel like one character is treated unfairly? I am glad Draco will have a baby, but I don
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From ANON - Seliki on March 19, 2014
I love this and hey welcome baby Malfoy...lol Harry on pain med is hilarious thanks for that.
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From Sparrowhawk on March 19, 2014
Ha ha, sounded like you were having a bit of a hard time with those impatient for Draco to have his biological children. Not making fun, it's just a little funny since I'm an author, too, and it makes me laugh when some reviewers get impatient for something I have planned later on. I tend to either assure them it *is* going to happen or just ignore it for the time being if they're being too persistent, lol. Anyway, love the latest chapter, it's so adorable reading about Draco with his own child. Can't wait to hear more and what leads up to Draco going to have fertility treatments. I also wondered since reading that, are there Drackens that are infertile? What happens if they are? In a typical Dracken mateship, I mean, we *all* know Harry would be different. I love your Harry; he's so adorable and stubborn and definitely has the "I don't care what you think I'm doing this *my* way" sort of thing going on. Just love it! Can't wait to read more, both in the Scaled Bits and in Rise of the Drackens, love both stories sooooo, soooo, soooooo much! Obviously I don't review often, but I never miss a chapter ^_^
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From ANON - Diana on March 19, 2014
I've never left a review on AFF before since the only story that truly affected me was finished years before I read it. Until your story "Rise of the Drackens". I have been reading AFF for several years now, I started reading these stories when you first began publishing them. In fact, I started reading the original storyline by the original author!

I absolutely adore both R.O.T.D and R.O.T.D. - T.S.B. I enjoy both the tone you write in and your style of writing. You are clear, consise and you never focus exclusively on one character. You have made these characters, both original and not come to life. I very much enjoy how they have their own stories, lives, families and you show all of it. In my opinion you have a gift. You have a gift for writing to a wide audience, and especially a gift for storytelling.

When I realized how captivating your story is to me, I just had to look up the other stories. I quickly understood that I was not just captivated by these two stories but by you as a writer. I eagerly await each and every installment of all of your stories. I'm not aware if you plan on writing your own novel in the future, but I would be elated if you did. I wish you all the luck in the world and am anticipating your next chapters. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
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From Jan on March 16, 2014
LOVE IT! Please update chapter 35 soon ^_^
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From ANON - tinkerbabe7 on December 26, 2013
Woot man this was suuuuuuuuuuuper HOT! Loved it! Can't wait for more.
I have a question, does each person have a nickname for another? Like Blaise calls Harry "mio Prezioso" and Nasta calls Harry "Cariad" or "Caru". But do they only call Harry pet names? This just was on my mind. And I can't remember if it had been mentioned before....
Regardless I always love your chapters!
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