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Reviews for Last Chance

By : DragonOfVenus
  • From ANON - Kaygie on December 29, 2011
    Can you please please please update soon with another scene like chapter 3?? *drool* So fucking hot. I had to go back and keep reading that last bit, "I hope you're happy now, you insatiable slut. I have work to do." Best. Line. EVER!!! More pleeeease?? Oh, and I think Harry should be Voldemorts sex slave and have his heir. Just sayin. ;) But I'll be happy with more chapter 3 scenes.

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  • From bloodshound on December 27, 2011
    should have figured this would head into bdsm territory. voldi doesn't do vanilla loving relationships. :P
    And he didn't want har to start with.
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  • From ANON - SinfulMind on December 27, 2011
    that scene of sex was disapointing... not because it was badly written or unrealistic, no; but because they just jumped into the bed so quickly and I was not even prepared for that, it happened so suddenly and with no building of a mood. And thus it made little to no impression on me. Why did Voldemort agreed to it just like that? And Harry? Very out of character, both of them. And so far they seem pretty shallow - I see no depth to any of the characters you presented us with.

    It seems to me that you have the story already written and ready for posting; I hope you get better as chapters go.

    -SinfulMind
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  • From sarah999 on December 27, 2011
    Interesting chapter, but I like it. : ) Hope you update soon.
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  • From Dhalim on December 27, 2011
    Interesting- is Harry's behaviour the result of Voldemort's desires, his closer connection with the horcrux inside him, or his own needs/wants? I thought it was the former at first, but the comment at the end of the chapter made me wonder. Anyway, I like how quickly you are updating this story- looking forward to reading more! :D
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  • From bloodshound on December 26, 2011
    wouldn't voldi be irritated if potter was hurt? does it count as wanking if someone else is in control of your bod at the time?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2011
    wow... voldemort taking control, eh? That was a nice scene. I am curious how will their next meeting look like? And how will Harry reacts when he fully relizes what happened?
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  • From Ravenheart on December 26, 2011
    I absolutely loved your Voldemort! Thank you for this little piece, really. I was beginning to loose faith in the HP-fandom.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2011
    Begins intresting. Voldemort is very... polite, sound and reasonable - I don't know what to think about it, it's too soon to form any kind of opinion. But the story intrigued me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2011
    A good start. I like where this story seems to be going. Update soon!!
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