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Reviews for Unlikely Heroes

By : KusanoSaku
  • From ANON - SilverLion on March 10, 2012
    I've been reading this for some time, and I believe this is my first review. That said, you could use quite a bit of help with spelling and grammar. There was also a mistake in this latest chapter. Septima Vector is female, cannonically speaking. Whenever I write (more like TRY to write) I try to make it seem like it belongs in cannon as much as possible. There's plenty of info out there, so do your homework, and your writing will improve greatly (for one story I wrote over at tthfanfic.org, I actually chronologically lined up BtVS and Charmed so that it'd be more believable).
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  • From charmedromance on March 09, 2012
    Love it cant wait for more Please Update SOON! =)
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  • From hellangelhellina on March 09, 2012
    I love this story though it's a bit odd for me to like skeeter, I'm use to hating dumbbles, but not minding skeeter. So good job on a first.
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  • From ChaosLady on March 08, 2012
    Whoa. This story had me so entrenched that I've been reading this instead of studying for mid-terms. Wonderful!
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  • From djaddict on March 08, 2012
    *happy dance*

    So many updates, so close together! Yea!!!!

    Know that all of these plot twists and turns are important but hoping to get back to Harry and Draco more soon!!

    Enjoying
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  • From danawarner on March 07, 2012
    I wonder who was unfortunate enough to father Ron & Ginny?
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  • From Leania07 on March 07, 2012
    What an interesting twist on things. Makes me wonder who Ron and Ginny's father is...It would be so creepy if it was Dumbles. Few errors "...trying to live a live that should have been mine." Should be "...live a life..." but other than things like that, wonderfully done! I can't wait to read more and see what other twists and turns you take. I await the next chapter!

    Leania
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  • From justpucky on March 07, 2012
    EE for this chapter... in the summary to Gideon, they didn't mentions the loss of Percy's baby. WIll the stress cause gideon to crack and we have a good h/c session with Arthur and Mind Healer Tonks, or will we get a good healthy rage and he stops feeling like a victim?
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  • From JadenShadow on March 06, 2012
    I just read this story, and i really liked it can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From charmedromance on March 06, 2012
    WOW Can't Wait For More, Love What You're Doing With Arthur And The Rest Of The Weasley's. Hope You Update SOON! =)
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  • From savannah19742001 on March 06, 2012
    I love this story, the politics and intrigue is so good that I look forward to every chapter. It is like unwrapping a Christmas gift...thank you and look forward to more
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  • From danawarner on March 05, 2012
    I think the canon Prophecy refers to 'Dark Lord' Dumbledore, and not Voldemort
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  • From justpucky on March 05, 2012
    Oooo... is Mrs Longbottom really mostly ok, but cursed so she couldn't raise neville? His father sounds truely catatonic, but if his mother removed so he would be raised the way he was (just like harry). 'cause He was close to being the child of prophacy also... I can't wait to see where you're taking this story.
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  • From ANON - hell's children on March 03, 2012
    sounds like George may be bound from his Draken blood
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on March 01, 2012
    I love it!!!! I can't wait for more. I see Pansy is a bint, what about Ginny what are her thoughts on all of this? When will the whole truth about harry's past be found out by everyone? What about the Tournament will Harry be made to compete? When will Ron FINALLY be expeled from Hogwarts for all the shit he's pulled, Will charges be brought up on Dumbledore's neglegence of the school, being to easy on Ron's punishments and Harry being forced to live in a abuseive house without checking on him? What will happen if/when Pansy tells Narcissa about Draco and his consort Harry? So many questions, I need answers!!!!!

    SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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