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Reviews for Unlikely Heroes

By : KusanoSaku
  • From hotflower901 on January 10, 2012
    Wonderfully done of Ted to get Percy and Oliver to mourn together. Laughing at Draco getting a hard on due to Harry's moaning. LOL. Nice of Gred and Forge to ask for Harry's forgivness. They can help to cover Harry's back when he returns to Hogwarts.
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  • From danawarner on January 10, 2012
    I'm surprised Dora didn't go to Deerfield to see what the old coot was doing there
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  • From ANON - She-who-waits-in-darkness on January 09, 2012
    Love your story can I give you an EO Exceeding Outstanding? Lol I think that should be a new mark its what you deserve! Please add me to your emailing list if you have one for updates!
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  • From hotflower901 on January 09, 2012
    Excellent that the Wesley men are standing up for Percy. Sad about how Sev was treated by his father. Slow painful death is to good for the Dursely's
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  • From danawarner on January 09, 2012
    I hope Dumbles gets his butt kicked HARD
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  • From jujukitty on January 08, 2012
    one quick thing in the beginning of the latest chapter, you wrote "They had decided unanimously that he had to go." referring to dumbledore i assume, but the way the little paragraph makes it a little vague after just naming about 6 different people; you might want to actually name dumbles.

    good to see teh weasley men stepping forward to help and fred and george realizing they owe harry an apology. keep up the good work :)
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  • From jujukitty on January 08, 2012
    awww poor percy, love luc stepping in to help oliver and percy come together again. and ollie being so understanding and contacting the malfoy men
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  • From danawarner on January 08, 2012
    Loved the end of the trial
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  • From savannah19742001 on January 07, 2012
    Wow!!!! what a great story and can I say that I am very excited to read the next one. I can't believe they beat Dumbledore (that is how much I got into those two chapters)...This story is really good and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - breath_of_fire on January 07, 2012
    Those chapters were almost all taken from the actual books. I can understand using a paragraph here and there but NOT entire chapters. I don't want to re-read Rowlings' story - I want to read yours! It's boring to read whole pages of Rowlings' actual text.

    Grade: Troll

    p.s. you have a good story! believe in it. you don't have to rely on the canon text to make a great story. if you must use text from the books, use a passage, not whole pages that become basically the entire chapter. looking forward to reading your next chapter
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  • From hotflower901 on January 07, 2012
    Outstanding. Now what will Harry do? Go back to school or be home schooled? At least until Ted can help him move past some of his pain
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  • From Leania07 on January 07, 2012
    Oh, how crafty and cunning!! I really enjoyed this chapter. A couple of missed letters (I instead of If at one point), but thoroughly enjoyable none the less. I await the next chapter, eagerly!
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  • From hotflower901 on January 05, 2012
    Sad for Percy. Always thought of him as a prat. Now he has a good reason for it. Hopefully they can get Harry out of this. Outstanding
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  • From wolfcathope on January 04, 2012
    So far a Exceeds Expectations but has potential for outstanding.
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  • From danawarner on January 04, 2012
    So Dumbles is homophobic manipulative bastard. Personally I hope Sirius I rips the old fart's throat out.
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