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Reviews for Unlikely Heroes

By : KusanoSaku
  • From ANON - blj.14 on February 12, 2013
    Oh really?! Neville just out of the blue let Harry down like that? And again you beat the crap out of Harry (using Ron). It's getting to the point where I expect him to fall off a cliff or get blown up with TNT ala the cartoon character Wile E. Coyote. And since you made Neville be so inept,I think he should suffer the consequences. After all,Harry and Draco are both nearly dead,although I'm sure they'll both miraculously pull through in the sequel. (Sneer)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 07, 2013
    It is an epic story...many many people with a lot going on in each of their lives and each comes with a intense past in most cases & that sometimes involves even more people. It must be quite a job to keep track of all those characters & all their back stories & involvements with each other.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Sol on February 06, 2013
    Finished with Chapter 50, but I think you might have gotten the chapter numbers wrong. I can't wait to see what happens next! Now, I'm going back to read the companion story.
    Definitely Exceeds Expectations.
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  • From ANON - Rogue on February 06, 2013
    I love this story! I love that other characters are featured but it does seem as though Harry has disappeared in everyone else's drama. Will he return soon?
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on February 06, 2013
    Not the most exciting chapter, but not bad either.
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on January 15, 2013
    wow, finally got all caught back up with this. love the different pranks going on and luc and sev finally get the recognition they deserve. ummm, i am curious how between one chapter and the next, sev goes from being unwilling to show his mates his true self to being worn out because they found it incredibly sexy. i'm assuming that part will show up in Scaled Bits. keep up the good work, i look forward to more
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on December 28, 2012
    Ron's going to do something stupid again, isn't he? Nice prank. Excellent update!
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  • From roni004 on December 28, 2012
    love it
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  • From tazztazz on December 28, 2012
    this is a brilliant story but you realy need to look at this chapter as you have duplicated it so you have 12b then 12b streight after eachother both containing the same thing and there was nothing different.
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  • From gossipgirl84 on December 28, 2012
    I always knew that Ginny only wanted him because he was the boy who lived. This just proves she has a very, very unhealthy obsession and should seek help from a professional. I hope Harry doesn't fall for her, the tramp. Can't wait for more. It's really good.
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  • From ANON - Infinitypoet on December 01, 2012
    I have to tell you that the Chuvash are a REAL group of Turkish people not imaginary magical creatures! You should have did a little research before choosing a name for your race of beings. Maybe you can rearrange the creature back story to have them named Cuvash because they too, are native Chuvashia or even Siberia where the Chuvash mainly live these days.

    I'm not flaming you,really I'm not...but as interesting as this idea was at the beginning, the lack of character development and the horrible grammar/spelling issues are too off putting to really enjoy the intended content. So please do yourself a favor and find a good beta. Your ideas have merit and a beta could really go along way in helping you execute them.
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on November 17, 2012
    just a quick note, i'm sure somebody else has to have told you before now, but ch.27 has most of the whole story text repeated in it
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on November 16, 2012
    I tried to review this last night but it kept giving me illegible passwords! It was outstanding, like your work ususually is.
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  • From Krucksue on November 15, 2012
    Excellent - more please. thx.
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  • From savannah19742001 on November 15, 2012
    I was so happy to see a new chapter...this story is so great and brilliant that I always look for a new chapter when I am on this site. And I can't wait for Draco and Harry's inheritance
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