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Reviews for Unlikely Heroes

By : KusanoSaku
  • From Jan on April 15, 2012
    Oh please, oh please update chapter 40 soon ^_^
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  • From Janna on April 15, 2012
    It was great. Thank you for taking the time to update. Please continue when you have time.
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  • From Jan on April 12, 2012
    I absolutely love this story. Keep up this amazing work ^_~

    Please update chapter 38 soon.
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  • From demonsangel on April 10, 2012
    Chapter 36 is horrible stretched and I am noticing many mistakes. A lot of missing quotation marks especially. As it is, it is far to stretched to read.
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  • From savannah19742001 on April 09, 2012
    Can't wait to read more about the wands, I really liked you thoughts about wands and I look forward to finding out about Severus's wand. I love this story and can't wait for Luc, Sev, and Remus to get together. I love the slow romantic part of Harry and Draco's love story.
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  • From ChaosLady on April 08, 2012
    Hey! I want to know what Severus' wand is! Outstanding update!
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  • From Janna on April 08, 2012
    It just keeps getting better. Thank You for taking the time and energy to update.
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  • From HarryDracolover_72 on March 26, 2012
    I absolutely love this story. i just found this a few days ago and have finshed reading everything posted so far. You are an excellent writer, i love how you can always keep me surprised and guessing. i cant wait till the next update. How often are you trying to update?
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  • From ChaosLady on March 24, 2012
    Outstanding! I'm sorry I havn't been reviewing lately but I haven't had time to read really long chapters, so I had to save it for the weekend. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - 6phoenix6flame6 on March 24, 2012
    Amazing, you've really improved your writing style since you've started.
    I've noticed in the first bit of the story that some of the chapters had been copied twice in the same chapter(if that made any sense)
    But other then that, the story is amazing and I can't wait to read more of it.
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  • From savannah19742001 on March 24, 2012
    Brilliant as usual!!! I loved it and can't wait for more...and I can't wait to read Severus reaction to Draco getting attacked.
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  • From Janna on March 22, 2012
    Please continue the story. I really like it. I have read all 33 parts in just 2 days.
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  • From ANON - ~lilyrose on March 22, 2012
    I am absolutely loving this story, it has so many unique features i have not previously encountered. your writing and plot development are wonderful, despite a few grammatical issues here and there. i cannot wait to see where you take us readers next, nor how this will all end. but i look forward to your updates.

    now for some constructive criticsm. as i noted previously, there are some grammatical errors, lack of commas and the like. also, it seems some of your sentences are missing a word. both of these happen rarely, maybe once or twice a chapter. they are far from off-putting, but i want you to be aware. also, in this chapter, somewhere in the middle-ish (honeydukes?) there is a sentence with the word "dracken" used. there was at least one other usage in a previous chapter, but i don't remember where; indeed, i did not mark it out until reading your note on the change to "chuvash". also, on quite a few of your chapters the entire chapter is listed twice, and once three times. this is a little distracting for a reader, so i hope you can either change it, or at least avoid a repeat in the future.

    all in all, this fic is unique and exploring new ideas and directions for me. i cannot wait to see the scenes when the marks are removed, nor the reactions to the outting of ron and ginny as dumbledores. it will be *very* interesting to see padfoot's reaction to the truth and Sirius I's reaction to padfoot. i also cannot wait to see what you reveal about the backstory of what happened between gellert and albus.

    you are doing a fabulous job, and i look forward immensely to your next update.

    cheers,
    ~lilyrose
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  • From Kiheki on March 20, 2012
    I love your story. Please keep on going! I cannot wait to see what happens next.

    Chapter 12A is a bit messed up though? The lemon scene is deleted with the words 'Lemony stuff found on AFF' or something like that? Just thought you may wish to fix that ^_^
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  • From savannah19742001 on March 20, 2012
    I can't wait for more....this is a brilliant story and I look forward to reading the next chapter when Severus and Lucius find out about what happen to Draco....going to be good.
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