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By : KusanoSaku
  • From Hancock23 on June 27, 2017

    Draco is soo pathetic I want to cry.


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  • From ANON - pooh on April 18, 2013
    sorry, almost missed reviewing this chapter,I get in the reading mood and forget, the forward/next chapter is so easy to hit...
    good chapter, had me almost sitting on the edge of the seat/ the tension was there, not too much, but just enough. like the kids, they are often the truth in the story as in real life..."out of the mouths of babes"
    on to the next chapter!
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  • From gossipgirl84 on February 12, 2013
    This is a good story a little too ooc for my tastes but still good and why did you have to change their names? Harry's name is supposed to be Harry James Potter, Harry isn't short for anything. And Draco is just Draco Lucius Malfoy. I hate it when people change their names. It's like they are different people, which makes it harder to read, especially when you have Draco acting like a whiney little girl and Harry being the one in control of everything. Though Ron is still in character but everyone else isn't. I'm not flaming though, so don't get mad. Just giving my input. Cause I do like this, it's just different.
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  • From gossipgirl84 on July 11, 2012
    Sorry for being a pain but Harry isn't short for anything, he's just Harry James Potter not Harrison Jaime Potter, eww, and Draco is just Draco Lucius Malfoy not Draconis Lucius Abraxas Malfoy. I hate when people do that. Can't names just stay the same? why does there have to be all this name change.
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  • From gossipgirl84 on July 11, 2012
    Now Draco's having triplets? what the hell? It's not really that possible for a person to have twins or triplets if it's not genetic, which it's not in either the Potter/Evans or the Malfoy/Black. You need to do some re-search before you post. This story is good, just, somethings are kind of annoying.
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  • From gossipgirl84 on July 11, 2012
    So you gave Draco female parts? why? and why do you have Draco turning into a girl, it's like he can't do anything for himself. Though, I love that Harry divorced Ginny, I just don't get why you had to totally change Draco's entire personality. Don't hate me I'm just being honest.
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  • From gossipgirl84 on July 11, 2012
    I never got what Harry saw in Ginny, they just don't go well together.
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  • From ANON - Dlove on May 11, 2012
    I really like your story. I love the twist and all of the connections. I really hope you write more because I can't wait to read more!
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  • From savannah19742001 on April 24, 2012
    this story is getting so wild and i really love it...i hope that draco has another little one soon...great story look forward to more
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on April 24, 2012
    I am really enjoying this story and i can't wait to read more
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  • From ChristinaMcMillan on February 02, 2012
    good
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  • From savannah19742001 on January 07, 2012
    I absolutely love this story and I love the interaction between the characters...I really like the Charley and Blaise thing great work on the sub characters! Can't wait for more....
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  • From sesshysangelgirl on January 04, 2012
    Your story is quite interesting. I look forward to reading more and also to see the reactions of Ron and Hermione to finding out that Harry is now with Draco. Keep up the good work
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  • From savannah19742001 on January 04, 2012
    Thank you for the explaination...I really am enjoying this story and I can't wait for the next chapter and I am so glad you are putting this on so quick...Thank you for a great read and I look forward to more...
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  • From savannah19742001 on January 04, 2012
    Sorry I didn't elaborate.... I was curious about the bond magical between Harry and Draco...
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