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Reviews for Tension

By : ashleigh87
  • From ANON - Annie on February 11, 2013
    Your story is great so far. I hope you finish it and post it.
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  • From LadyFreak on January 15, 2012
    i'm loving this. hide and seek. too fantastic. Has me giddy alongside Hermione lol
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  • From LadyFreak on January 12, 2012
    Very nice so far. I like that Hermione isn't giving in completely or a complete puddle on the floor (yet anyway). I like where this is going and your style fits the characters perfectly. Can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From Magzie on January 12, 2012
    Me again,

    "I don't know why you have this sudden intreats in me Malfoy but I can guarantee that I will not be participating in this little game you're playing." She looked straight up at him.

    Just so you don't have to look through the whole chapter. I really am enjoying this, I can;t wait to see where you take it!

    Cheers...again.
    Magzie
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  • From Magzie on January 12, 2012
    Fun little story so far, one typo at the beginning of chapter 2, I believe you meant interest, I'm on a cell phone or I would copy and paste the paragraph for you, keep up the good work, it has a lot of potential.
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  • From Samibear on January 08, 2012
    I can't wait to read more! :)
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