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Reviews for Harrison Slytherin

By : IsysSkeeter
  • From Alex2675 on November 01, 2019

    HI!!!!!

    This story is amazing!!!!!!!

    Write more soon please!!!!!!!!!


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  • From Nagiliver4ever on March 10, 2014
    Love it. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - DragZ on January 19, 2014
    Wow .. hope your still writing this story. Seems like a good one.

    Will you please let me know if you do update on e-mail oogies4u@gmail.com

    DragZ
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  • From ANON - Lucy on February 25, 2013
    Hey hun, great plot line. I can only think of one way you could possibly make the story even better. Getting a beta to look over the finished chapters. Probably would be best if you finished your fabulous plot so they don't cut out any wonderful plot points or clever play on words, Whist still helping to catch those pesky typos and the odd spelling and or grammar mistake.

    Keep up the good work!
    I hope you update soon because your story is intriguing.
    So please update soon!

    Luce
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  • From ANON - emma elizabeth pressnell on February 14, 2013
    wow its brillant
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  • From ANON - izetz on December 03, 2012
    Pls plz!!! Update!! I'm dying to know what will happen nxt!!! This story is one bloody brilliant...plz update soon?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2012
    Very well written. i am looking forward to more.
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  • From bloodshound on June 06, 2012
    once again, the Engrish made it extremely hard to wring sense from this. I want to enjoy the story but its like reading bad subtitles. I have to sort of guess at the meaning. I'm sure it wasn't this bad at the start.
    Please PLEASE get a bata...
    Who or what is Oaks and why have we not heard of it previously.
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  • From bloodshound on May 19, 2012
    i had to read this twice to get the gist of it. please, please, watch your spelling and tenses. the story is good but the spelling and the switching around of tenses when people speak makes it confusing. perhaps if you speak it aloud to yourself or something when you type it to see if it flows right and makes sense? this is unbated yes?
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  • From ANON - Storm on May 18, 2012
    Yay an eagerly awaited update! It was great, I can't wait to see what Yukisan's part will be. Great job, can't wait to read more!
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  • From Janna on May 16, 2012
    Really good, but it will be even better betaed, but I can understand that sometimes it is hard to find a good beta. Please continue when you have time.
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  • From BellaRiddleMalfoy on May 14, 2012
    Love it can't wait for an update!!!!!!
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  • From bloodshound on February 08, 2012
    will do though at the moment, it's a bit like watching anime with bad english subs, i sort of get what your saying but some of the words aren't quite right.
    i wish sal could see it from Har's side. If he doesn't go back and voldi takes over, all har cares about will die.
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  • From jgoodman on February 08, 2012
    Love this story and can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Gabe on February 06, 2012
    Interesting plot line. But you have GOT to get better at writing. Your grammar is absolutely terrible at times. You get phrases wrong and your past/present tense needs work. It too often for a decent read. Other than that your sentence structure is decent as well as your dialogue. I recommend getting a beta reader.
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