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Reviews for Dreams No Mortal Ever Dreamed Before

By : estherkolbe
  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2015
    I'm hooked and there is no more to read... Oh woe is me. :'(
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  • From Ladydragonstar55 on December 29, 2013
    I have read most of your stories and i belive you write really. Hope you return to finish your stories.
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  • From NinaSweets on June 05, 2013
    Oh I love it! A wonderful story, I do hope there will be more :)
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  • From Darkless on September 30, 2012
    Found your story yesterday, and (angst whore that I am) I am loving your plotline. while repetitive pain and anguish is not desirable (yeah, right!) it gives us a chance to grow, to mature, learning responsibility and consequences. I think your Severus might be a little soft, but at least his snarkyness comes through. Also, his previous 'hardass' attitude might have been partly an act for his cover as spy and long-term bitterness. He obviously has the capacity to love or he wouldn't have felt such depths of loss when she died.

    Well, Chapter 40 and Harry is depressed with his health deteriorating for lack of maintnence. I'm disabled, and I understand how daily, cronic pain can wear you down, even with a high pain threshold. Throw in emotional depression, you have a deadly combination. I'll be waiting for the next chapters eagerly.
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  • From pretireader on August 29, 2012
    I really liked this story. Please note the past tense. You really turned this piece of literature into a piece of crap when you hit chapter 33. It was, up till that point, an emotionally moving, dramatic piece of art. Now it is a wishy-washy, stephani-meyer-esque rag. It had so much emotion, but then you hit a spot where all the emotion turned into an inconsequential piece of fluff where even your own characters were not themselves. I would seriously think about rewriting the ending. The path the story takes is acceptable at best, but the way you propose it is horrid. You had the characters to a T in the beginning, now they are one dimensional, angst ridden squabblers. Then you got repetitive with the problems: misunderstanding, Harry gets hurt, Harry recovers, disgusting teenager-esque smut, misunderstanding, etc. Please, seriously think about revising the ending. Don't throw away a great piece of literature like this with a scrappy ending.
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  • From MichT on August 23, 2012
    hiya... I absolutely love this story! I have had it bookmarked for a long time and was wondering if you are planning to update and add chapters or whether u had abandoned this one... Please please continue!!
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  • From PureBlack on May 17, 2012
    Great story. Are you active on fanfiction.net as well?
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  • From ladilyndi on May 06, 2012
    Another great story. I found you after reading Control and I really enjoy all of your stories. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you for all your hard work.
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  • From Leania07 on February 08, 2012
    Bah, I needed a tissue for that one. I'm surprised Sev thought that Harry would let people check up on him, of course he wouldn't answer the door or give a response to someone, when he'd been giving Sev the silent treatment for so long already. >.< (BTW, not saying it was out of character for Sev, because I can see someone really being that naive when consumed with their own pain) So someone has to force Harry to talk about this new pain, and get him to move past it before anything gets better. Hit rock bottom and scraping the bottom of the barrel all at once. Better be going up from here or else he'll be in another dimension ;)

    Leania
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  • From XxLennethxX on February 06, 2012
    Hi! I just found out your story and I love it! I read it in two days and I have to say, you are a really great writter :)...I enjoyed a lot. Poor Harry, he is suffering a lot :/...and when he lost his child, It was very sad. I hope that Sev an Harry would have their own child and the curse on Harry can be removed :)...well, hugs and cya!
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  • From bloodshound on February 05, 2012
    yeah, not sure why they did that. the 'improvements' seem to have caused the 'block of text' syndrome right, left and central. at least you got a handle on it.
    sigh, snape, better and stronger for it, my arse. he should know that har is emotionally vulnerable, that if the one person who said they wanted him suddenly didn't anymore, har would likely just give up. He should KNOW that! Seriously, who did he think was going to check on har? he's the only one who knows about the potions etc. All i can say is that it's obvious sev wasn't thinking very clearly either.
    sadly, even at rock bottom... there's always a way to find a new rock bottom. I hope they can head up from here though, since i doubt har would survive a trip further down.
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  • From Madamdragon on February 05, 2012
    What made Snape think Harry would get better after her left??? Okay so they had a rocky mess but c'mon. Men are so dumb. He wasn't gonna get better without Severus. Hope Harry is okay and that Snape gets the scare of his life before he decides to leave Harry again. Hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From danniperson on February 05, 2012
    poor harry :( loved it
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  • From estherkolbe on February 02, 2012
    Hi, it's lancelot. It seems to be a problem with the site not the story. All the other chapters that were fine, look the same. Right now there is nothing I can do, unfortunately. Green
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  • From Madamdragon on February 02, 2012
    Also I agree with RecordKeeper. For some reason all the fics I read have NO spacing at all...I wonder WTF is going on?...Oh well.
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