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Reviews for Dreams No Mortal Ever Dreamed Before

By : estherkolbe
  • From Madamdragon on February 02, 2012
    That was sad. I feel sorry for the both of them, but I hope you make things okay for the both of them soon. SOON!!!
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  • From Recordkeeper on February 02, 2012
    There is a big spacing issue with this last chapter. In the sense that their are no spaces at all. As far as the story goes i think enough shitty things have happened to Harry and Sev.
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  • From danniperson on February 02, 2012
    depressing :( update soon!
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  • From curious123 on February 02, 2012
    okay, i was enjoying the fic until it reached chap 35, then it felt like my eyeballs hit a wall of words and crushed them under their collective mass. other then that, you are an update god, and your story is good.
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  • From calliope33 on January 31, 2012
    wow... this is a great story! I really like it - personally I've never been a fan of erotica that was only sex; I need solid writing to go with it, some depth, you know? And well, this definitely has it. Lol I was thinking half jokingly "Oh, yeah he's pregnant", when the huge push for him to go back to the hospital came, and I cracked up when it turned out to be true It's sad how it came out, though.

    This is one of those "could have happened" situations; man did I feel bad for Snape at the end of the Harry Potter books, and that whole ten minutes of flashback with him near the end of "Deathly Hallows Part II" I thought was the best part (it really tore me up when Snape looked so tortured and said "but it's her SON!")

    Regardless, I am really looking forward to reading more of this story; it's the reason I finally registered for the site.

    Calliopetheminx
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  • From Leania07 on January 30, 2012
    Oh harsh!! Moldie Voldie!! Couldn't leave well enough alone and let Harry and Sev have some peace hmm? Bring him back to kill him again!
    Okay, now that that's out of my system, another good chapter, hope Sev understands Harry needs a moment to pull himself together, and I really hope it doesn't tear them apart. I await the next!

    Leania
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  • From Madamdragon on January 30, 2012
    Poor Harry and Severus. Usually when there is a miscarriage the chances for another pregnancy being miscarried rises. I can't believe you did that!!! You're soooo mean. Meany Butt!!! But I know for things to get better sometimes things need to get worse. I hope this doesn't break them up. I hope Harry doesn't blame Snape for this. Update again soon please.
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  • From magentah on January 30, 2012
    I think it will bring them together because you wouldn't do that to us after all this time! Haha. Love it as always. So sad for Harry :( He's already suffered so much. I hope he is able to connect with Severus sooner than later and accept the comfort that his lover is surely aching to offer. Thanks for updating so quickly!
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  • From danniperson on January 30, 2012
    That broke my heart :(
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  • From bloodshound on January 29, 2012
    yeah, i'm thinking har won't be carrying to term.... i mean, maybe if he were in optimum health he'd have a chance but har isn't. n I can't see har ending the life of his child so easily though. it's in his nature to fight for it.
    As far as abortion goes, i think medical danger to the parent is the only good reason for it. Even so, it's a decision that's going to cost them either way.
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  • From jujukitty on January 29, 2012
    just read the last two chapters and not an unexpected twist, but kind of curious as to how after one day away and harry feeling sorry for himself with no other (mentioned) obvious symptoms this prompted sev and dumbles to check for pregnancy and why immediately, why not stay at the beach for however long they had originally planned, the fact that they each packed a suitcase alluding to an extended stay versus just an overnight bag. just feels kind of rushed. hope you explain things better in the next chapter because up til now it's been a great story, feeling very well thought out, this last bit seems kind of like you just tacked it on as an afterthought
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  • From moodysavage on January 29, 2012
    Poor Snape... I agree with Harry but he's going to have a rough time of it being afraid for Harry the whole time.
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  • From Leania07 on January 29, 2012
    Ah I thought it might be that, but I was going for the high drama, less expected ideas. I'm guessing there's going to be a few close calls, magic draining situations where Harry's life will be in jepardy? Can't wait to read more ^.^

    Leania
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  • From danniperson on January 29, 2012
    omggggggggggg. getting good now lol. kinda scary though o_o hope you update soon!
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  • From Madamdragon on January 29, 2012
    You have them all done? Wow you are awesome. I will jump up and down or crawl on my belly through hot coals and broken glass if you will update again soon. I'll make cutey faces or meany faces if it'll help. But I know you won't kill off Harry. I hope... But I will try to wait patiently for the next update. Try...
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