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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Breeding Darkness

By : Danyealle
  • From ANON - Unknown on February 19, 2014
    Excellent, I can't wait for more chapters soon (it's been over a month now)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Darkserpentcat on February 17, 2014
    I finally caught up with this fic after a long time and I can't wait for the next chapters.

    That said I sort of have a minor request. You see I would really like to see a part of a chapter where we are actually see how Fawkes the Phoenix feels about everything that is occurring and maybe also have him leaving Hogwarts. After all with all of Dumbledore's manipulations I really can't see Fawkes being all that supportive of Dumbledore. Maybe you can have Fawkes basically having stuck around with Dumbledore as long as he did because he hoped that Dumbledore would eventually be persuaded from the choices he is making, or something along the line.
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  • From ANON - Unknown on February 13, 2014
    Kill Wormtail please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Unknown on February 12, 2014
    In my opinion you have matched the vibe from the original Author really well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From LizzyBug on February 09, 2014
    Danyealle, I posted something back in July of last year on the review reply page (I'm sure it was the wrong place to post it) that never got a response. I decided today to re-post that comment here. I hope that this will get a reply this time.

    "I was reading though your story, but got a little stumped at chapter 28. I know that Athey/Aya had been doing a first run-through of a day at Hogwarts, and a second run-through of the same day at Morhda Abbey. By the end of Chapter 27, we were at the end of the second run-through of November 1st. What day was Chapter 28 on, and why did he not use the time-turner when he got to Morhda like he usually does? If he were to arrive there and not use it, then he would not have been able to be there to leave 10 minutes before he arrived. Is he supposed to miss a day at Morhda? Or did his history change? Wasn't he supposed to go back in time then to relive that day as his second run-through after leaving school?"

    Thank you,
    Lizzy
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  • From ANON - LaLiLu on February 07, 2014
    Love it.
    I
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  • From ANON - Cat on February 01, 2014
    This seems like a great continuation, but you use way too many comas. It's driving me crazy. I can't focus on the story. :( Would you consider going back and fixing this? You'll keep a better audience that way.
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  • From ANON - Evanna Von on January 18, 2014
    Another chapter where nothing is happened... I feel like you lost interest in the story. Can you put some action in it please? Every chapter includes a conversation and some guy's thoughts, that I don't care about. It's boring.
    Something must happen, 'cause I'm going crazy...
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  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on January 15, 2014
    I love this story so much!

    Cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - shelly_webster on January 15, 2014
    Ok, first this may seem harsh, but it's so irritating that it stopped me in the middle of reading, forcing me to write this little note. Why, in the name of all that's Dark, you repeatedly finish your sentences with "anymore", it's such a strange quirk, it interrupts thought process, just jumping at me out of nowhere (or rather out of otherwise properly formulated portion of text). Stop it, please. Don't make it another case of nice and interesting fan fiction that's ruined because of spelling, grammar or other such writing issues. Now, ranting done, it was not my intention to offend. I really like this story.
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  • From EvaJames86 on January 14, 2014
    I just LOVE this story!!! Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - pooh on January 09, 2014
    MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM what a soft warm chapter..at least the ending, liked it
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  • From ANON - Tlyna on December 29, 2013
    I really love this dark Harry and I adore your Tom Riddle. He is so much more interesting a character than the total egomaniac nut from the books and movies. Truthfully I hated Dumbledore from the first time I saw the first movie as I saw his manipulations even then. I think your Dumbledore is closer to what he really was than as he was portrayed in the movies (never read the last three books or saw the last two movies). Glad neither Bill nor Kingsley were dumb enough to go along with him in trying to become the Light Lord. It is very interesting what you are doing with Hermione. So many write her as a narrow minded goody two shoes who never takes off her blinders when it comes to authority figures. You are letting her actually use her intelligence. Looking forward to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - si_zilla on December 15, 2013
    Excellent story. Very succesfull adoption. Thank you for continuing it. You have kept story true to itself and are excellent writer.

    I have been hoping for an expicit torture scene since Wormtail cast the AK, and I was quite disappointed when you scipped it. Any hope that you would still write it. I can see several alternatives how you could add it. So. Severus and Lucius/Thorfinn/someone and a pensieve? Or maybe Sirius' POV? Both?

    The training session with Skeeter is one my favorite scenes.

    So, some torture please.

    Thank you for writing this story.

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  • From Genuka on December 14, 2013
    Bella will enjoy the attack on Privet Dr. *grins evilly*
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