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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Breeding Darkness

By : Danyealle
  • From BadGirlgoesworse on June 03, 2013
    Ah! Finally some really interesting action. I can barely wait to see what will come out of it! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Evanna Von on June 02, 2013
    Well, it was a great chapter, thank you. I wanted to ask some questions. First of all, what about the ring? I mean has Dumbledore found out yet that the ring what he is posessing is not the real ring? Because his sister didn't appeared when he called. Don't you think Dumbledore will go mad, if he finds out? So what's the date? Where are we in time?
    Other thing: Hogwarts issues? In some ways this is connecting to my first question. Where were Thor or Snape or Dumbledore in the last cuple of chapters? Okay, I get it, they will be in the next chapter, but where were they? 'Lessons' with Dumbledore? Or with the young dark wizards lessons in Hogwarts?
    Other thin: Sometime I feel like the characters just repeat themselfs of each other. There is no arguments, everybody understands and agrees and 'on the same opinion' with the other. The conversations are not realistic this way.
    For this chapter: when Tom and Harry tested the invisible cloak vs killing curse on a goose, the bird had been undamaged. It could stand up. So why Harry can't?
    Don't get me wrong, I love this story, I adore this story but feel like it makes no progress, doesn't go anywhere. Just stopped in a time, and doen't go further.
    (Sorry for the grammar or any mistakes I made. I'm not English, I'm Hungarian and I don't speak English well enough, but have to make this review to tell you my opinions)
    Please update soon! :D

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  • From ANON - GoddessonmyKnees on June 01, 2013
    Great chapter. Wow, never saw that from the rats planing. He is so going to regret living. The way I would handle it is pollyjuice Sirius into Harry and have him live Harry's life.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Diana on May 30, 2013
    I hope Harry can get better...
    I'm loving this story, it's one of my favourites. I can't wait for the next chapter...
    Please, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sam on May 30, 2013
    OMG harry got hit by the killing curse. Thank god he was under the cloak!!! Can't wait for what Tom does to worm tail and the two people tom is summing. Also how the awesome sex is going to go between harry and Tom when harry wakes up!!!!!!!
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  • From Leania07 on May 30, 2013
    Ah what a place to leave it hanging! How long before the more intelligent (non-Azkaban hindered) 'witlessness' figure it out (i.e. Narcissa)? Oh what a delicate and tangled web you have woven! I can't wait to read the next chapter, I'll be scouring my inbox every day!

    Leania
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  • From ANON - Cyllaenoi on May 30, 2013
    I just recently found this story (having come from the prequel), and I'm really excited that you're continuing it! I love this series (mostly because Harry is genuinely Dark, intelligent, and powerful), so thank you for picking it up. I know you have your own style, and I think it suits the series too. I'm following you on twitter for updates now, and I can't wait to see where you go with this!
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  • From bloodshound on May 30, 2013
    *falls over in shockk. wholy hell, you weren't kidding about the crap splatter fest. that idiotic little worm. He is soooo meat. whatever Riddle plans for him, i'll be there cheering... with pom poms.
    hazar for the hallows, they kept har alive. on the plus side, the DE's can't doubt hars devotion now. :P
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 30, 2013
    ooooo can't wait to see how Voldemort handles Harry's dual life! and also Wormtail's fate!
    Great chapter!
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  • From Tryagain4me on May 29, 2013
    So damn good!
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  • From ANON - BlackLily on May 29, 2013
    AWESOME!!!! I LOVE LOVE this story!!!! can't wait till you update again!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Reba on May 29, 2013
    The prophecy is clear as water. Do give those chracters some credit. They are the elite not only in money but in brainpower as well. Thinking outside the box, making connections without needing all the clous is what they are good at.
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  • From ANON - Noelle on May 28, 2013
    Great adotion of the story however you do not frequent Hogwarys as much through the story, is there a particular reason for this? Otherwise fantastic.
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  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on May 25, 2013
    I love this story so much!

    Cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - GoddessonmyKnees on May 23, 2013
    Great chapter. I love how they are working Sirius in. I am worried about how much they are underestimating the rat though.

    Can't wait for more.
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