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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Breeding Darkness

By : Danyealle
  • From Tryagain4me on April 09, 2013
    I missed the Tom and Harry scenes in this one! I like that Sirius and Tom are trying to get along for Harry's sake.
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  • From ANON - Sam on April 07, 2013
    Ya!!! A chapter! Was a good chapter. Can't wait for peters plan to blow up in his face, maybe have harry catch Peter in the act of getting rid of sirius and going all junior dark lord on him would be exciting to read about. Maybe a steamy scene between Tom and harry afterwords. Can't wait for Remus to be brought into the "loop" and see sirius again, mbye stay with him in the house. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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  • From ANON - BlackLily on April 05, 2013
    Awesome!!! Always reading and re-reading your part of the story! Loved the Chapter hope Wormtail gets caught and finally killed! Hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - GoddessonmyKnees on April 04, 2013
    Great chapter. I want to skin the rat. I hope they see though him quickly and hurt him.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Diana on April 04, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Outlawgal on March 31, 2013
    I have finally finished what you have written so far and I am impressed. I think (yes they are shorter) but you writting fits well with the original author. In fact I like your shorter chapters a little better because some of the originals chapters were too long and hard to get through in one sitting if tired (which I always end up starting a chapter like at 12am and then can't finish due to tiredness)
    I would love to be notified when you update that would be awesome.
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  • From BAFan on March 31, 2013
    Uh-oh. What's Wormtail up to? Glad that Remus is finally starting to think for himself and that Bill and Fleur aren't automatically doing what Dumbledore wants. The seeds of doubt sown by Harry are beginning to sprout. Let's see how big they grow!

    On another subject, do you also write under the pen name SpeedyTomato? Because your writing styles are almost identical. Just curious.
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  • From ANON - Excessively Complex on March 31, 2013
    Brilliant story, I have literally spent the day reading it! I'm very impressed with the take over but am utterly relieved that you stopped with the hissing s's! Whenever I see those, I generally stop reading a story as it's not easy on the eyes. I don't know if it's worth going back and editing them out? I couldn't read what Voldemort was saying but then I think I am a bit dyslexic.
    Anyway, congratulations, your writing style is just as good as the original authors and I think it's amazing you've taken it over so well.
    Looking forward to the updates :)
    Excessively Complex
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  • From Leania07 on March 30, 2013
    Oh what does Wormtail have up his sleeve; if only they could obliviate his memories. Didn't you have that down at some point or was that probably another story? I don't remember and I've read so many stories. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!

    Leania
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  • From ANON - Catherine Smith on March 30, 2013
    Hey there! I really loved this chapter, it's brilliant how each chapter builds new layers into the story all the time. I can't wait to see what Peter has planned with Sirius. I'm pretty sure it won't be anything good and it definitely won't be good for Peter's health if he is caught, especially if it's Harry doing the catching. Remus as well seems to be giving quite some thought into what Harry told him and I wonder what he wrote in that letter. Really looking forward to seeing what happens now and I hope that Sirius will stay safe ;D.
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on March 30, 2013
    Finally caught up, can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - FruitCat on March 30, 2013
    I the way you're taking the story. There's just one thing that bothers me about it. You keep telling us things: 'That pleased him' 'That annoyed him'. I would rather deduce that for myself by reading the characters' expressions and actions, not having to be told.
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  • From ANON - roosickle on March 30, 2013
    you need to get on facebook so we can keep up there, I only found htis fic a week or so ago, and read it all in one night, then I went back and read the first int the series , wow it blew me away, I have issues with this site so I can't favourite you but will keep checking
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  • From SheWhoIsPowerful on March 28, 2013
    I am in love with this story both the parts done by the original author and your contributions to it. on a side note with this site being the way it is and all I was wondering if you has a regular update schedule or it you could email me when you are going to post a new chapter, because i will forget to check for updates and i really want to see what happens next.

    Questions? Will Snape ever learn the full story? I would love to see his reaction. Will the people who are on the Light side who are beginning to question what hey think they know ever find out the full extent of whats going on? Is Ron still going to try to repair his friendship with Harry now that he know he was manipulated? You know what i;m gonna stop asking questions now -as they will likely go unanswered- and wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - LeaniaSTL on March 25, 2013
    Good to see an update; irritating that I don't stay logged in as much anymore though. Interesting twist and turns, I wonder if Dumbledore will try to foist the mantle of Light Lord on some unsuspecting innocent that suffers the backlash because of it, or if Bill will stall long enough. I loved Lucius' reaction to Harry being 'Evan'; I laughed at the mental image I had. I can't wait to see what Severus' reaction to Harry's home life will be; I know he's supposed to be a caustic bastard, but couldn't he be a bit more friendly after? Perhaps his remarks not so cutting and more...banter? Seeing Harry for himself (baby steps, I know) and maybe attributes reminiscent of Lily since his eyes were opened? He's my favorite...*sigh* but I'll have to take what I get I guess. Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter(s).

    Leania
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