Click Here!

Reviews for Harry Potter and the Breeding Darkness

By : Danyealle
  • From ANON - proftlb on January 15, 2013
    Just caught up on all the new chapters & I'm loving where you're taking this:) Thank goodness I caught up at this chapter rather than the last one with the Sirius cliffhanger! Can't wait to see what happens next - thanks for sharing this with all of us:)
    Report Review

  • From Aingealfire on January 10, 2013
    I look forward to more. I've enjoyed how you're working with this!
    Report Review

  • From jules3677 on January 07, 2013
    Well I have just finished reading what you have written since taking over the story. You are doing really well, you have settled into the rhythm of the story & are bringing a new freshness to it. I like how you have maintained all the characters & haven't proceeded to do away with any or throw a curve ball through the plot. I am so glad that someone is doing something about the Dursley's & getting Harry his independence. Bringing Sirius into the fold will be interesting to read as his cousin is in the infirmary & Sirius has little self discipline, I look forward to reading the chaos he may create (hint hint). Pleased that the intensity of Harry & Voldemort's relationship has not slackened. Reading Dumbledore's behavioural deterioration certainly brings to the front of the debate what is light? what is good? what is right? Have fun with that one!
    Looking forward to read more of this story. Thankyou.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ... on January 06, 2013
    Just read the first of your chapters, looks good so far although i'd suggest a second beta, some of the grammar is a little off and makes some sentences difficult to read. Otherwise, keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MirrorSpirit on January 03, 2013
    Having read Athey's work before yours, I must say that I am impressed with your continuation. You have kept the spirit of the original and built off of it; making it yours while not breaking the flow, especially in stories of this size is not easy. I commend you for that accomplishment and can't wait to see how you keep going with this. Keep up the great work!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - eezsor on January 02, 2013
    you almost got me there until when the elf popped in. thanks for updating...can't wait for the next chapter. I so envy you for being able to write like this. :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - AR on January 01, 2013
    Really happy to see this story has been adopted. Look forward to seeing how you incorporate Sirius into Abby life, how things are evolving for Remus and the wolf packs, what surprises Hermione's family tree might reveal, how the new History professor will turn out (Frienze took over Divination again?), and just what will become of Harry and Tom. When will Harry tell Draco about Nick being Tom being Voldemorte and Harry being Evan being Raideomorte? Lucius now knows, and there's the lovely anticipation of what Harry will do to the Dursleys. Oh, and I wondered about the lawyer--if he's Longbottom's layer, too, couldn't Harry ask Neville/Augusta for an introduction, thereby adding another layer of distance from the DEs. Since Dumbles seems to be pushing things, will he up timeframe from what we're familiar with in the books? Will he still try to use Sirius? Will there be any other hang-ups from the soul bond between Harry and Tom? Is there a chance of a surprise mpreg? Oh, now wouldn't that speed up Tom's plans to eliminate Dumbles and get Harry out of Hogwarts that much sooner! Ha!
    Hope the muses visit and keep your fingers busy!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - BlackLily on December 31, 2012
    LOVED IT!!!!!! awesome I really can't wait until you update!!!! I always end up re reading this whole story so many times!!! I love that Sirius is there now....maybe he will be more okay with the dark? I don't know but AWESOME!!!
    Report Review

  • From BadGirlgoesworse on December 28, 2012
    Wonder where you'll go from there. I'm looking forward to more.
    Report Review

  • From bloodshound on December 24, 2012

    *beams. luc and cissa really do have an excellent working relationship. V and har's is heading that way too.
    *winces... oh wow, i wonder how much having Siri in the mix will complicate things... though if the rat/worm responsible for setting me up and sending me to hell for 12 years or so suddenly appeared in front of me, i'd probably hex the little bastard to.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - tess on December 24, 2012
    Ok, I know Athey gave this story to two people. I read the other one first and was disappointed, fortunately I went ahead and read yours and am very happy. My only sadness is chapter length but to be honest how many people actually write chapters as long as hers? The only other thing I'm waiting for is a lemon (I know some writers have trouble with them). Since this is AFF and Harry's an acknowledged maschocist I'm hoping the lemon will be more BDSMish. I hope you keep writing for a long time to come & MERRY X-MAS!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - yaya on December 11, 2012
    Mostly introspection in this chapter, but sometimes it's nice to slow down so the later action has more of an effect. Great ending, though, and I'm eager to see what happens with Sirius. I don't know if he'll remember the new portkey Harry gave him to the Abbey and escape the Aurors that way (and maybe interrupt a moment between Harry and Tom?), or if he'll get a glimpse into Harry's power if one of the Aurors is a Death Eater who will obey Harry's orders to buy time for him if Sirius is ever captured. I do anticipate Sirius will be living in the Abbey soon, though, and can't wait to see how he reacts to seeing Tom's real form and how he acts around Harry. I definitely get why Sirius would have a hard time imagagining the Voldemort he's seen on the battlefield in any kind of romantic relationship, let alone one with real feelings and not just politic alliance or lust.
    Good chapter and, as always, looking forward to more!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lourdes on December 07, 2012
    you are doing a great job with this story.
    I hope Sirius gets away.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on December 06, 2012
    I love this story so much!

    Cant wait for more!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mystic_Dreamer on November 28, 2012
    Loving the story so far. It was a bit of a shock to the system with the change of writers, but it ended up well done. Hope the next chapter comes soon :)
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!