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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Breeding Darkness

By : Danyealle
  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on May 08, 2012
    I love this story so much!

    Cant wait for more!
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  • From Darkserpentcat on May 07, 2012
    Hi I was just wondering somethings and wanting to make a request but whether you do it or not is up to you

    Here is my question: Since Voldemort is no longer going after muggleborns and has revealed that muggleborns are descendants of squibs to his followers will Narcissa and her sister Andromeda make up with each other and if so will Tonks and her family go neutral because of this? I hope so since Tonks is one of my favorite female characters

    Here is my request: So we know from Aya's original Descent into Darkness that all muggleborns were squibs so do you think you would be willing to make Tonk's dad descended from a squib of the Hufflepuff line? I think that would be cool especially if Tonk's inherited her metamorphmagus abilities from Helga Hufflepuff
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  • From Hollzhatter on May 05, 2012
    I'm really glad this story is still going! This chapter moves things along a bit. I really love the friendly interactions between Harry and Draco, they are fun to read and especially shows how Harry has changed from the Gryffindor golden boy, to the Slytherin bad boy! I adore Tom/Harry. The vision thing was interesting, how did it happen? More mysteries! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From RAVENSLUST on April 29, 2012
    OMg! a new chapeter oh so glad!

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  • From bloodshound on April 25, 2012
    now how the hells brazen hinges did dumbles swing that. I mean, i know the man is running to a deadline (literally) here but this is pretty blatent for him. what does he get with stirring the pot over the firings... well, dear syibl is obvious, but still. Most unsubtle D.
    I look forward to seeing how V and har manage this, cause dumbles is going to get way suspicious if har doesn;t spill about his 'vision' to someone.
    Emancipated har huh. nice.
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  • From Leania07 on April 25, 2012
    Oh now who's the sneaky snake, hmm? Curious as to how Dumbles implanted a vision, and included Parseltongue to boot. I'll be stewing over that for a while, and you're so crafty I probably won't figure it out and have to wait until you reveal your secrets. Somehow Draco is going to get more involved, isn't he? Harry's got more of a friend in Draco than anyone else, perhaps excluding Barty. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter!

    Leania
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  • From ANON - adoracorazon on April 24, 2012
    Yes! Your back! I've missed this story ^_^
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  • From knightkat on April 23, 2012
    Nice, I like the twist, and I like Harry's chain smoking. Gives him the stressed angsty teen feel, that to much maturity can loose.
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  • From ANON - Grinedel on April 23, 2012
    Dumblefuck you BLOODY WANKER! DIE!!!
    Anyway that was good!!! I love this story! Love it love it love it! I'm checking for updates everyday. I was so glad today! Work sucked and then I went home and UPDATE! And life was beautiful again.
    Please write some sex scene in the next chapter that would be awesome.
    Love and Kisses

    Grinedel
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  • From ANON - KainCrow on April 06, 2012
    I like how things progressed so far, I hope everything continues well.

    But I had been wondering a few things.. I am guessing that by telling Severus about the so-called 'accident', Dumbledore wanted Voldemort to get information more or less directly or indirectly, by forcing Severus to tell Voldemort that he won't be available for a few days. If that is the case, and basis on the established fact that Dumbledore will not trust anyone completely unless they have 'light' affinity, wouldn't he attempt going on casting that affinity-revealing spell mentioned in 'descent to darkness'? Well, at least in secret, or have someone else doing it.. In such case, I'd think some of the Dark supporters should get trained (at least who are advanced & strong enough, as it was mentioned that it is a very advanced piece of magic), especially those who are not openly supporting Voldemort.

    Another thing is, Fudge being close to Harry and Lucious, I feel it would be much, much easier for Harry to just tip off some facts to 'Minister of Magic'- like, some 'negative' reactions to Umbridge frpm Gryffs and Puffs? Harry seem to be quite stressed in Aya's previous parts, so this can lessen his pressure from, at least, the students who aren't aware of his true side. It's also possible for Harry to subtly inform Umbridge (not openly to avoid more conflict with Dumbledore) of some 'trust-worthy' individuals or 'people to watch out for' lists. It can serve as another distraction for Dumbledore to take care of, as Hogwarts is his base of operation in the sense that it mass-produces 'Light' wizards and witches.

    On the lighter note, I am enjoying daydreaming in my free time about Harry 'accidently' crushing the Prophecy in the middle of Ministry Atrium in front of everyone and letting all of them see/hear.. ..It can either serve as a 'hope crushing' factor to make all wizarding communities realise that Voldemort has his 'equal' and they truly have no hope of resisting, or making them trust 'Boy-Who-Lived' so much as the 'would-be-savior' of the wizarding community and get a lot of advantages in public depending on the nature of prophecy Dumbledore left in there.. I think it can be either real or fake one, but my current favourite image of daydreaming is Harry Avada Kedavra-ing Dumbledore from behind while everyone is too stunned to move at the revealation, plot holes/cover-ups/cleaning ups be damned. But then, that's what daydreamings are for.. Especially when you are a fanfiction writer and often has hard time getting rid of plot holes!
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  • From ANON - Mawwe on March 25, 2012
    Hello.. just wondering if this story is complete? //Mawwe
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  • From ANON - Skull Bearer on March 15, 2012
    I am really enjoying your story. It's just as good as the previous author's take, and it's good to have it going again! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on March 14, 2012
    I hope Harry and Tom win, and that Harry is able to get Tom's Horcrux somehow before Dumbledore destroys it. I love this story so much! Cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - ryuuta on March 14, 2012
    I really do wonder if finding out what's niggling him about Evan Harris would let Snape concentrate better on other things or if it would bother him even worse :) I mean, just the thought of the Dark Lord being intimate with someone is enough to raise his hair, not to speak about it being the cursed Potter spawn. Voldemort better implement his devious plan before Dumbledore prepares something extremely inconvenient for Harry. I'm glad he has a good idea about how to possibly confront Harry in controlled environment.
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  • From bloodshound on March 11, 2012
    back up plan oh that sounds down right ominous. I wonder what dumbles will do when v and har don't nibble at the bait? why would they need to when they already know the real one though dumbles isn't aware of that, i s'pose. hmmm.
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