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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Breeding Darkness

By : Danyealle
  • From ANON - kevin on January 08, 2016
    Amazing story. Can't wait for more. Any way I can be emailed when another chapter is added?
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  • From ANON - Ripple on January 07, 2016
    Great job at continuing the breeding darkness! I was so disappointed when Athy said it was abandoned, then I found this!! I'm loving the way the plot is developing. Although your writing style is pretty different, it's still doing a fantastic job at keeping me hooked on the fic. I'm so excited to see how it's going to proceed with Harry being the master of death :)
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  • From ANON - MaryLuna on January 02, 2016
    I am a big fan of the story, especially the original. You are doing a great job continuing it! It woul have been a right shame if it remained abandoned. However, i have to admit that i was slightly disappointed by the last couple of chapters. I'm missing the interaction between Tom and Harry and Barty. A bit too much Draco. But thats really just personal preference! Also i think a few chapers back you wrote 'brekkie' for breakfast, and somehow it really stuck to my brain as a horrible informal word to use, but I suppose thats also a personal preference.
    All in all I am excited to see this story develop and can't wait for the next chapters! Please keep up the work and well done! I don't think i will ever get tired of reading and re-reading it!
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  • From ANON - Chii-pet on December 27, 2015
    !!!!!!!!!!! Another update! Merry Christmas to me! Gaaaaaah I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to Harry and Nick's wedding! Keep the updates coming!
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  • From Anaelyssa on December 24, 2015
    Chapter 66=65. Yay! An early Christmas present, thank you!

    Good chapter. Drawing closer and closer. Albus is a fool. This will probably make the battle more dangerous for Harry and the aftermath worse for Dumbledore when his potions run out and finally demand their price. I hope Albus doesn't get a peaceful afterlife. After all, Harry *is* (will be) Master of Death, and plus, Dumbledore has gone against Magic herself.
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  • From CDGaymer on December 22, 2015
    good chapter, wish u would update more often but atlas RL come first. Hopeing those potion r for dumbledork and not to control Harry. Hope Harry makes it thought the visions he gona get soon. Harry need the wand soon.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on December 21, 2015
    Dumbledore is one scary man. Nothing is more frightening than a zealot! The potions that Dumbledore got are scary, I hope they are for himself and not to bend Harry into doing his will. Fabulous new chapter! Thank you for the excellent update to your incredible story! Can't wait for more! Hope you have a wonderful holiday season and a Happy and safe New Year!
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  • From ANON - staar on December 20, 2015
    An update !!!!! good god you gave me a Christmas present !!!!! loved it !!!! man Dublles he does not give up...now with potions he get him to do mind things again to Harry hope Harry gets help fast and don't listen to the visions !!!!! Thanks again for the update !!!!!! merry christmas !!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DragZ on November 29, 2015
    an awesome story, hope your still updating.. if so can I be placed on notification for updates PRITTTTTY PLEASE ...
    My e-mail is oogies4u @ gmail.com

    Thank you so much
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  • From ANON - FHK on November 13, 2015
    Hello =)

    I discover the sequel of the fic on ff net and i want to say it's totaly crazy the way you had managed to continued without break the rythm ! I really like it ! it's two day i'm on and i can't wait to have the next chapter =)

    Glad to discover your work =)

    See you soon on this wabsite !!! =))))
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  • From ANON - Cc on November 10, 2015
    Thank you for continuing this story!!
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  • From BAFan on November 03, 2015
    I posted this in May or so of this year, but a question I had asked in it was really dumb - as in I smacked myself in the head when I read it just now. So I removed the stupid query.

    Ch. 59

    So happy to see an update! If there is one criticism I have on this, it's that there's too much talking. Everything gets talked over and discussed and then discussed again. Bring on the action, I say! *g* Hope we'll see another update soon!
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  • From ANON - the starrose on October 02, 2015
    Hey

    The story line is very good and gripping. You have continued the original story in an admirable way.

    Some observations:
    1. The language and style of writing from chapter 25 to about chapter 45 was very good. It has changed completely from there on. Its almost as if someone else is writing it.
    2. In the later chapters the language is very casual. Phrases like "I'll get with" and "That's for damned sure" are repeated too many times. The feel of the characters which has been developed through out the whole story is reduced due to the out of character language.
    3. Words like fag/ciggi instead of cigarette and brekky instead of breakfast, hols instead of holidays is distracting.

    Somehow the last few chapters are going into too many minute details and it feels like the plot is lagging behind due to this.

    Please don't take this to mean that I did not enjoy this story. I think it was a good read. These were some points which I felt would help in improving your writing style.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 29, 2015
    hallo,

    I am thankful, that you adopted this story.
    There are just some things I noticed:
    Tom alreadym knows the secret of Grimmauld Place. Sirius sent it to Harry, I think at his birthday, and Tom read it too.
    You sometimes use the same word very often. e.g.: "plenty" in the last chapter. Perhaps you can change that? Would be great!

    Thanks for all your work
    And i'm looking forward to the next chapter

    panth
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  • From Dratias on September 28, 2015
    You're doing great on this! Lol I really hope Harry gets to kill ol' Dumby..
    Can't wait to see an update.
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