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Reviews for Finding The One...Or Two

By : sparkalla
  • From ANON - Jessica on January 20, 2012
    this is really cool, update soon
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  • From schalmers91 on January 20, 2012
    Loved what I have read so far an't wait for more.
    Can you please email when an update occurs at movies_n_celebs@hotmail.com as there is no other way for me to know when there is a new chapter to read.
    Kind Regards
    Steph
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  • From ANON - Alkeni on January 19, 2012
    I eagerly await more.
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  • From cristinstar on January 19, 2012
    Great layout for the story! I too have been frustrated by the unfinished Veela-stories, and the unfinished Blaise/Hermione/Draco ones. Thank you for taking on the task of rectifying this! You've drawn me in with the perfectly logical explanations of Veela mating. I can't wait to see how you develop the storyline!
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  • From ANON - smt79 on January 18, 2012
    wow i loved this background on veela and how they find their mates.. excellent and i cannot wait til the next chap!!!
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  • From ANON - smt79 on January 18, 2012
    hmm interesting meeting with hermione and draco.. i wonder what was on his mind??
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  • From ANON - A on January 18, 2012
    Loving it so far! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From CafeAuLait on January 18, 2012
    I really like that most of the Slytherins are happy and well adjusted after the war. I take my hat of to someone for FINALLY giving Crabbe and Goyle something to do. I can totally see them being a couple of mister fix-its.

    Will Draco be a traditional Veela? They are usually pretty dominant and possessive of their mates. hint hint The possessiveness is the traits I like most about veela fics, well, at least the ones I've read.

    hmm...is Blaise also a part Veela? That would be very interesting.

    Thanks for updating
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  • From ANON - A on January 17, 2012
    Interesting beginning. I'll be checking back to read more.
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  • From CafeAuLait on January 17, 2012
    Poor Ron, lol.

    I like this lighter Hermione. I think it's good that she's isn't so neurotic.


    I agree with the other reviewer about the story being tad wordy at times, but not so much that it annoys me.



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  • From reriddle on January 17, 2012
    Ok here I go.

    1) good start. At times you are a bit wordy. Like the paragraph about Hermione not so suddenly becoming a pretty woman. I LOVE stories about Draco/Blaise/Hermione as Veelas so I do hope that you continue to work on this story and further develop it. As you've only written 2 short chapters I'm interested to see how it will progress.

    2) just an issue with your format. The second chapter spills over the side, making you scroll horizontally.
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  • From ANON - colao on January 16, 2012
    so far so good, just waiting for the scene to be set so we can get into the potentially juicy plot...I like this threesome
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2012
    OHHH
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  • From CafeAuLait on January 15, 2012
    You're off to a nice start.
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  • From ANON - Smt79 on January 15, 2012
    Omg!!!!! I love this already, and we haven't actually read about Draco and Blaise yet!!! I have to say I TOTALLY agree with you about veela fics and how right when you get hooked they get abondoned!!! I cannot wait to read more of this!!!! I am addicted to veela stories thank you for starting one and I cannot wait to see where this story goes!!!!
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