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Reviews for Phases of the Night

By : 6phoenix6flame6
  • From katsplay68 on February 29, 2020

    Hello, I wanted to send this review and express my wonder at your story.   I am not a fan of crossovers as a lot of them are about alot of stories I am just not interested in seeing or reading.   However I am totally in love with this story.  I can not wait for you to update.  I know you have plans for Draco and the boys and I saddened by the deaths of his parents so give him a happy ending.  I can't wait to see what happens to the deranged, slim sucking, no balls, off his f$%king rocker Dumbledore.   Great job keep going. 


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  • From Danae1972 on August 12, 2017

    I truly hope there will be more soon. This is a wonderful story!


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  • From morningstorm70 on August 29, 2016

    Itsbeen awhile since you last updated i am dieing to know what happens next 

    Please update 323


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  • From Quetzal on July 07, 2016

    Hey,

    So I really like your story, it's adventurous and heartbreaking, but with lots of wonder, comedy and fluff thrown in as well. There are some moments where I tought it was a little cliche (like finding all of the weasley brothers- minus Ron-  fucking at the same time) but that just meshes with the comedy. And bringing all of our heroes back to life is great and all, though it seems cruel that your only bringing back all of Harry's people, what about poor Draco?

    Anyways, I just wanted to give my opinion and tell you that it would alot of your reader very happy if you continued with the story even if its just another three chapters to finihs everything because you don't feel like going through writing another serie. Or you could  put it up for adoption? it could be a solution.

     

     


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  • From cryort on June 10, 2016
    i really like your story. please write more soon.
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  • From blackcatlover32 on May 06, 2016
    Very impressive, very sexy. Can't wait for more.
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  • From BAFan on March 23, 2016
    Ch. 10

    *blush* I hadn't picked up that they were at Durmstrang. Not very intelligent of me.

    ~Debbie
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  • From BAFan on March 23, 2016
    Ch. 9

    Exciting battle sequence! I'm curious to find out how Viktor Krum ended up there. You asked for corrections, so here goes:

    //Charlie guided Norbert down to the ground in the court yard of the dark foreboding castle. The castle was smaller then Hogwarts but no less breathtaking in its own creepy way.//. - Smaller THAN Hogwarts.

    // "That's our que to leave.. . .// - Should be "cue."

    //The scent of chard flesh made Charlie gagged.// - Should be "The scent of charred flesh made Charlie gag."

    Okay, there are others but I'll stop here.


    ~Debbie
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  • From BAFan on March 23, 2016
    Ch. 8

    So in this story Bella is a petulant little brat? I guess that means she isn't Edward's Singer, right? Very interesting premise you have going, though I suggest getting a beta; there are numerous typos and other errors.

    ~Debbie
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  • From morningstorm70 on March 22, 2016
    I didn’t think i was going to like this oneI'm glad I was wrong
    Please let me know when you update
    Morningstorm70@yahoo.com
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  • From cullengal101 on March 15, 2016
    hey
    brilliant chapter. absolutely love this so far
    cant wait to read more
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - Thorilian on March 04, 2016
    Loved it, hope ther is more.
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  • From kdarnell2 on January 30, 2016
    This is an amazing story! I can't wait for additional chapters.
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  • From ANON - whitebuffalowmn on January 18, 2016
    wonderful story! I love the fact that James is back, even though he's mated to Voldemort. and Lily has a bunch to make up for, I can't help but wonder who you're going to put Cedric with. I'd love to see Neville with one of the vampires...except for some mistakes in English I didn't see anything wrong with your tale. please continue on with your story! thanks for writing this for us all to enjoy!
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  • From Jan on September 21, 2015
    Wow, the Weasley clan sure have lots of stamina 😍 please update chapter 13 soon.

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