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Reviews for Care

By : SaitouLover
  • From ANON - Recordkeeper on July 31, 2012
    Ive never heard of it. but if you manage to track it down let us know. I would like to read it also.
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  • From teriwright on July 30, 2012
    i can't help with your search, but wouldn't mind a link to the one you have bookmarked.
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  • From ANON - julie on July 30, 2012
    Ok so I thought this was just going to be a simple piece of smut but I really like the plot that is developing. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From tkykitty on July 24, 2012
    Amazing! I love how you are adding more and more plot to this story. Don't get me wrong, I love the x sceens too! I cant wait to see where the next chapter takes us. Will snape give harry some "old way" texts to read (or maybe harry already bought them but didn't notice?) How will Filius' role affect Harry later when he finds out about the Stewards? This is so awesome and I cant wait to find out what happens next! PS I am normally an Albus fan but I really want snape to just get rid of him. lol. I love how much I hate ur Albus.
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  • From ANON - Arcane on July 23, 2012
    I really, really love this story so far. Hands down, it's the best Multi-Chaptered Snarry that's in fandom right now being consistently updated. Speaking of updates: If you'd like a way to be able to alert your readers to when a new chapter is released, I'd recommend posting 'Care' on HPFandom. HPFandom has a feature that allows users to 'favorite' a story and get e-mail updates on when said story is updated with a new chapter. I'm also a bit curious on why it's not on there, anyway, to tell the truth... it's certainly more visited than Aff.net is these days. Just some food for thought.

    I'm also curious on Snape's reasoning for taking Harry under his wing (so to speak) --- is it mere lust? Affection? Or did he initiate his relationship with Harry because the Magic told him to? I'm also curious on how the Potters were Stewards for the Old Ways when James ended up marrying Lily (a muggleborn); wouldn't that exclude him from Stewardship? And if it *did* exclude him from Stewardship, then wouldn't it, in essence, exclude Harry since he's a half-blood, and by definition of the Magic, a watered-down bloodline? That reasoning would also mean that Snape (another half-blood), would be unfit to be the Head if his magic isn't as strong as it could have been had he been pureblood. At least, that's what I got from your explanation on the Old Ways --- that the magic has been (and still is) bred out of wizards for centuries via 'mixing' their bloodlines with non-magical beings. Or am I wrong? ;

    All questions aside, though, I can't wait to see more from you and it'll definitely be a chore waiting weeks for the next chapter of this lovely gem to come out! Cheers~
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2012
    I love your story but the first couple of chapters are like a completely different story? I was just wondering, are there plans to refer back to that?
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  • From HeartStar on July 22, 2012
    interesting more please
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  • From ANON - Tostum on July 22, 2012
    I love the direction you're taking this story - that the Harry/Severus relationship is only the tip of the iceberg on what's happening with magic in this world. Glad to have Flitwick as one of the good guys; cause he's small he's so often underestimated, like what you're doing here. But oh no, we've got to wait several WEEKS for the next update?! I guess that's the pain of reading an excellent work in progress!
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  • From SoulMore on July 21, 2012
    FAN!~
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  • From djaddict on July 21, 2012
    Wow! That was a right turn up and over a loop de loop! This is really going places I never thought it would.

    Enjoying.

    Little nitpick. You bear children, bare is naked. lol
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  • From ANON - Sara on July 21, 2012
    Great chapter, it's become a bit deep.
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  • From Hollibell on July 21, 2012
    Oh, wow! What an interesting turn of events! Did you have this all planned from the beginning, or is it coming to you as you write? The history of Magic part was really thought out and fascinating. I really love the idea of Severus as one of these Stewards, and in fact Magic's "Head" as it seems. The explanation as to why Dumbledore is so against the Old Ways makes so much sense. You've done a good job of using something from canon to support your AU story. I really am enjoying where this is going! I'm anxious though for Harry. He's left in a rather difficult spot if Severus is incapacitated, as he can't remove certain, ah, things by himself. I will be looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Moon Whistler on July 21, 2012
    You're most welcome!!! And thank you, that waffle would have been very nice to eat, :) but I'm glad you had it, it'll keep your energy up for writing & creating more of this great story!!! As always another great chapter for 'Care,' and hope to read another soon!
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  • From bloodshound on July 21, 2012
    Well, that's a serious kick. At least there's method to sev's 'madness'. Poor Har. Info overload. Poor sev too. Sheer power overload.
    At least sev isn't doing it for his own entertainment... well, that too but not JUST that.
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  • From ANON - Blanquita on July 20, 2012
    Thank God I didn't stop reading this after the scare with the first chapter...(although smut is always ok, I'm no fan of scat)
    The plot is growing stronger and stronger and I keep waiting anxiously for your updates.
    (Sorry for any mistakes... english is not my first language)
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