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  • From ANON - KittenRawr on July 16, 2012
    I LOVE this story!! Is there anyway you can let me know when you update??
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  • From ANON - Shirlisa on July 14, 2012
    For me to say I love this story, doesn't even come close. I absolutely adore it to the highest level. The way you have kept Harry and Snape in character throughout the whole plot is absolutely stunning to me, I really hope you continue this story, and finish it, I cannot wait. The style of writing is beautifully crafted, Snape's lust for harry is balanced well with his care for the boy. Such as when Harry was near passed out in the shop, I cannot wait to see how their relationship progresses, and where it goes for them. Snape's Master is such an amazing woman, I could literally picture how amazing she is. I hope you bring forth Harry's anger at one point, I would love to see how Snape handles that, after all every kid gets pissed once in awhile.You are an amazing writer, and I hope you don't stop this story, or lose your characters core, I really get annoyed when authors start going haywire. So far you have stayed on track, and I can't wait to read more!!
    -ShirShir
    Email: scott.229@wright.edu
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  • From ANON - Moon Whistler on July 13, 2012
    I really love your story, I can't wait to see how you take it in future chapters and sometimes left thinking how it would end in the epilogue. But please don't let that one review to put you or your story down. If she/he don't like it, or have a problem with it and how the story is, then they shouldn't have read and review 'Care.'
    And what would he/she knows about the rest of us, if we would like a story or not?!
    I have had read great stories over the years, and sometimes there would be a review putting the story, and the author down, and the next minute, the story is gone and the writer had given up just because of one hurtful little review. Don't let one person put you down!!!
    I love 'Care' since I first came across it!
    So please keep on writing for 'Care', I can't wait for more!
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  • From djaddict on July 12, 2012
    Really loving this more every update. The ease with which you go from tidbits of wizzarding culture, history, etc. to hot and steamy porn (lol) and back again is wonderful.


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  • From imsandir on July 12, 2012
    I really enjoyed this chapter!! The interaction between Snape & Harry was really good. Looking forward to reading more, thanks for your hard work!!
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  • From Madamdragon on July 12, 2012
    hope more is tocome soon. That bit was hawt
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  • From teriwright on July 12, 2012
    yay! a new chapter. what is the significance of the bracelet? the shopkeepers keep noticing it, it must mean something more that just portkeys, spells, etc.
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  • From ANON - Sara on July 12, 2012
    Cool chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Everyman on July 12, 2012
    This story is pretty awful. The idea that we, the readers, are meant to buy into the concept that the gryffindors are the hot heads for wanting to confront a classmate who spouts blatantly racist slurs is insane and unsupported by the rest of the story. I guess if you read the story with the assumption that morality is opposite in this AU then it makes some sense (ie snape is really caring for harry, rather than just sexually abusing him and trying to gain control over all aspects of his life to further the end goal; it's Hermione and Ron's faults for riling up Draco and forcing this otherwise good kid to call her the HP equivalent of a n**ger.) Here's the thing, I'm a big Nabokov fan so I understand the goal of trying to create complicity between the reader and the imoral or amoral protagonist, but this story does not do that well.
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  • From ANON - Tostum on July 12, 2012
    I am loving this story, and check every day to see if you've updated it. In my mind, Harry looks like the younger, sweeter version from Goblet of Fire, with the longer hair and sweet face. Here Snape is very appealing - dangerous, so competent, so very in control but also very concerned with Harry's welfare. I can't wait to see where the story is going!
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  • From HeartStar on July 12, 2012
    yay!
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  • From Hollibell on July 12, 2012
    Oh my goodness, that fruit and chocolate drink sounded devine. And Harry in Severus' lap, sucking it off his fingers, sinfully erotic. It's good to see Harry becoming more accepting of these feelings. I'm feeling better and better about this thing between them.
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  • From ANON - sarah999 on July 12, 2012
    Thanks for the chapter. : )I love the interaction between Harry and Severus in the restaurant. I hope you put more of that in later chapters. :D Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From savannah19742001 on July 11, 2012
    This story is so amazing....I love Severus like this as a strong and powerful wizard. And finally someone telling Harry about all the things he doesn't know about the world he now lives in....Thank you for a great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Moon Whistler on July 11, 2012
    Loving it, very beautiful story
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