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By : SaitouLover
  • From savannah19742001 on July 02, 2012
    Brilliant!!!! I really love this story and find it enchanting. I love Snape and wow Madame Cartwright is a firecracker! Love her spunk and how she kept biscuits away from Snape....Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Madamdragon on July 02, 2012
    I find Madame Cartwright? a little confusing. Senile I guess comes with age for some.

    Anyways. I am still liking the protection Snape is giving to Harry. I hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From silvertide on June 27, 2012
    I am really interested in the new shopping area and the new ideas that Harry is learning about magic. This idea is really interesting. I can't wait to see where it goes in the next chapter
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  • From HeartStar on June 23, 2012
    Interesting More please
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  • From HarliqueenNight on June 22, 2012
    I am in love with this story, i hope you continue it at some point
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  • From Lizzosaur on June 21, 2012
    I loved the last little bit of the chapter. With the spell that was used to keep Harry beside him.
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  • From SoulMore on June 18, 2012
    FAN!~
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  • From noxlumen on June 17, 2012
    Thank you for fixing chapter one. I didn't spot the same sort of issues in the other chapters. Thank you also for not writing Harry as a frightened little girl, but as a strong person with weak moments. I also enjoy that your Snape, while not exactly evil, is also not exactly moral and highly manipulative. Both seem a bit OOC, but it's consistent through the story and within reason for AU in my mind.
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  • From noxlumen on June 16, 2012
    Chapter one is defective. You have Snape insist on the gag remaining in Harry's mouth. Then you have Snape make Harry respond verbally to a yes or no question, and harry dose. Then you have Snape take the gag out so Harry can talk about what he learned. How is harry saying yes with a gag in his mouth? The sequence needs different handling and wording.
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  • From djaddict on June 15, 2012
    Well, I really prefer oatmeal raisin but sugar will do. lol

    I really love this fic it just gets more facinating with each update!

    Terribly hot as well, can't wait for more progression on that front.

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  • From Madamdragon on June 15, 2012
    Aw. I am loving this. I hope things go right for the two. Hope more is to come soon. Also I love how Snape is being so possessive and kind to Harry. Loving it.
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  • From JessicaHayes02 on June 15, 2012
    mmmm sugar cookies
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  • From bloodshound on June 15, 2012
    It seems Snape is beginning to care more than he thought he would. originally it sounded like har was just going to be his toy and pet, now it seems like he's beginning to think of har more as a person.
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  • From Lizzosaur on June 14, 2012
    Brilliant story!

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  • From phantomwriter2006 on June 13, 2012
    I have really enjoyed this story. It has its own uniquness that you don't find very often. I hope you update soon.
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