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By : SaitouLover
  • From tkykitty on February 21, 2012
    Amazing, Amazing, Amazing new chapters. I love how you write your story. Poor Harry, sometimes it seems that he is giving in and then the next he is his old self. Love, love, love it. Snape is a great character too, much like jk's but with your own flare. Can
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 21, 2012
    awesome
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 21, 2012
    Awesome
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 21, 2012
    I love this are you posting anywhere else? I don't like to long in an review to this site because i hate filling in the stop spam thing you have to do every-time you review, so i usually don't but i like this so much so i'll do it this time.
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  • From Leania07 on February 20, 2012
    Interesting; so Sevy's not just doing this for his own enjoyment hmm, but actually helping Harry...I see.
    I've learned my lesson, do not eat when reading a story like this, no matter how 'cast iron' you may think your stomach is. My sub will have to wait until tomorrow. *ahem* Again, not exactly my thing, but as I've said before, I'll read it because I have an open mind of some things and this is still tactfully done. Continue along this thread, don't allow yourself to become distasteful in how you present your story. You're doing well thus far, so bravo!

    Leania
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  • From Hollibell on February 20, 2012
    Again, so torn, lol. I'm trying to remember...the whole closing of the colon thing was actually made up, right? I think you said Snape lied or something....then used that potion to convince Hermione of the truth. It's just...he's caring for Harry so well on one front, then abusing him on another with the anal plug and penis cap and all....so torn. When Snape says, "Because no one else will." God, so said that it's true.
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  • From littlemissadams on February 19, 2012
    Interesting. That control potion that snape has people drugged with.... I do hope that Harry isn't one with it in his system. At least Harry isn't completely stupid enough to believe the crap snape was telling him about having some kind of problem with his bowel functions. I look forward to the next update!
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  • From Madamdragon on February 19, 2012
    Aw that is a cute update. I love how Severus is being a Seme to Harry, and how he cares for him. It's obvious. Love it. I hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From bloodshound on February 19, 2012
    interesting, so that one fact was enough to trigger this... i can't remember when the occlumency 'lessons' happened so i don;t remember if snape has seen his memories at all. Why would he want to make sure har has a soft cock btw? i wouldn;t have thought he;d care that much if har got embarrassed but then i suppose he;s still building a rapport with har, so it behooves him to gain his trust and embarrassing him would work against that. why make it so he can't go to the toilet at all though?

    I dunno, har seems pretty naive so far... though you're probably right about the stretching thing.

    is voldi still about... if so, snape is going to have to let his precious fight... unless dumbles concocted that prophesy from the air. Even if he's under snape control, i can;t see him being content to let it remain that way. after all, riddle was a genius... completely nutters now of course but he was a genius.

    no ones gonna dis or challenge har for not being in gryffindor tower any more?
    Is snape going to wait till har;s legal to take him? Har would be what, fourteen, fifteen? unfortunately, i doubt snape can liquid imperious everyone so he has to keep it legal ish for now.
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  • From RoguesAngel on February 19, 2012
    I love the story but wish you would use a larger font.
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  • From Ellie1217 on February 19, 2012
    Words cannot express. :D
    I love the story so far! I can't wait to see
    what happens next!
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  • From kitty08 on February 13, 2012
    Great story though Snapes character leaves me a bit conflicted. He seems caring but he is also a pervert who just wants Harry for himself. I am curiouse how Harry will react to the idea of ever having sex with Snape. :D
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  • From marie2curie on February 12, 2012
    Oh!!!! Controlling, powerfull, smarter than everyone Snape with total mindcontroll through a potion! Thats just totally brilliant! Thank you!
    Add to that your darkish bdsm startup with harry (who defenetly is in need of Snapes care) and you got me bouncing up and down in anticipation of your next chapter!!!
    Please update soon! This story is great and Im dying to see what you come up with next!
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  • From AlphazSlut on February 12, 2012
    looooveeee!!!
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  • From Hollibell on February 12, 2012
    AAAAnd I'm still torn, lol. On one hand, what Snape is doing is so very wrong. Its a very twisted way of showing compassion and caring for someone. He's preying on Harry's weaknesses; the fact that he's never had someone to care for him, that he's very ignorant about the way of things (the whole closing rectum thing. Pince must be under Snape's potion, too). On the other hand, he is caring for Harry, when no one else bothered to. He's taking him in hand and putting a stop to the destructive behavior that Dumbledore was allowing. He's teaching him to ask for help when needed, to let someone take care of him. Yet he's also taking extreme advantage, and using humiliation tactics. I will definitely have to keep reading to see where you go with this. I forgot to mention before, also, how intriguing it is that Snape HAS CONTROL OF VOLDEMORT! I really can't wait to see where that goes!


    I'm so glad you appreciated my warning. I debated on saying anything, because I've seen where other authors take advice like that completely wrong and blast the reviewer in review replies in the nexxt chapter. Your welcome, and thank you for taking that as the friendy advice that it was intended as. This is really well written, with clever descriptions, allowing your readers to really 'see' each scene. I'll keep reading. -_^



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