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Reviews for Branching Out

By : harrypegger
  • From Cateagle on August 22, 2016

    I can see her deciding she doesn't need to "settle" and go after Harry, forgetting Ron as much as she can.  That was a most hot and enjoyable story and I wouldn't mind seeing another chapter or a longer sequel.


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  • From ANON - on July 13, 2016

    I would like to read a conclusion chapter.


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2015
    Thanks for writing! I really enjoyed this. I have no idea how you managed to make Roen's letters polite and eloquent given the subject matter. I love how clean and positive the stories were. I don't think I've ever seen porn and prostitution done with such confidence and class.
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  • From ANON - CouncilMan69 on May 22, 2015
    A very different Hermione to the one we are familiar with, but she always had an independent streak and I can sort of imagine her doing this.

    Not sure where the story can go next, she is not going to be offered that amount of money again and I do not see her prostituting her self for more normal amounts.
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  • From ANON - 2CRsgt on August 02, 2014
    If a female is paid for sex she is a prostitute; whore; harlot at that is the dictionary definition. At that price Hermione could say she is a callgirl. She could always do another photoshoot. Maybe with Ginny as her best female friend, get all worked up and have a 3-way with Harry. Hermione could do better than Ron but not if she does another sex-for-money her rep would flushed down the toilet. I just remembered somthing! Hermione didnot make keeping this encounter quiet.He could tell anyony and everyone how he bought the rights to pop Hermione's cherry! Another knoch on his bedpost.
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  • From wover30 on August 02, 2012
    Great writing, awesome sex scene and even better characterization of Hermione. Keep up the good work
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  • From BlueAlquimista on March 29, 2012
    Well... Ron was right! Hermione is really a cheating slut... and sooo stupid!

    An old perv give her some nice worlds and gold and She let him to use her to satisfy the typical old-male-perversion?! To fuck a school-girl virgin... And for this, She thinks She is sooo special?!... She is soo stupid!... he,he!

    Obviously is not her the one who can do better, It's Ron the one who can do better than this Hermione! He will be an Auror, and wed some quidditch fan, Choo maybe... but her?... She has destroyed any chance at a decent job(who will take a knowed whore?)... She will end her days as a cheap whore in some dark alley.

    At least I hope Ron and Harry will fuck her before throwing her out of theirs lifes forever!
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  • From newtothis on March 28, 2012
    not trying to be mean, but hermoine did a playboy type shoot and did not tell her boyfriend, she slept with some guy why she still dating ron, i just dont understand how he the bad guy. if she broke up with him and then did all that that one thing.


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  • From joeparas1988 on March 26, 2012
    Really hot yet again!

    I'd love to see her do a 'whole-nine-yards' shoot for the porn mag with a random or two from the magazine, most likely.

    And while I read this for the porn, and it seems a little silly to critique characterisation, I think Harry and Gin were too quick to take Hermione's side. They should be on both sides, and as any friend should, tell Hermione that while Ron was being possessive, he did nothing to deserve the way he's been treated etc. What guy wouldn't be pissed after finding out his girlfriend did a hardcore photoshoot for a porn mag without telling them? lol

    Or were they not a pair? I don't remember...
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  • From kylanSB on March 25, 2012
    don't worry about johnofvegas he's been critical of h/hr shipper since "harry potter and teenage sex". he was threatening to low rate that story simply cause it didn't go the way he would have liked it.

    fantastic chapter, love smut story, reminds me of how casual sex life could also be for girls and not just guys. only complain from me the speed of the updates. i guess i'm a bit spoiled from other authors on this site ;)

    btw any news on that harry/pansy story of yours? thoroughly enjoyed it. 5+
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  • From Jewels812 on March 24, 2012
    i agree that this story doesn't need to drag out much more...a little more reaction when she is shopping in Diagon Alley and some closure with Ron, good or bad as long as he knows they are done and over with...great job with the short story
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  • From TomOfDC on March 24, 2012
    There is only one way I would approve of this story is if Roen turns out to be Ron with polyjuice. I mean, come on. The name is Roen? Take the e away, and well that's obvious.
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  • From kaikunnn on March 24, 2012
    i love your story i can't wait for the next chapter and are you going to make the main pairing a threesome between harry hermione and ginny cuase that would be awesome and hot and would work so well with what chapter 3 showed about there friendship and relationship between the three your fan kaii
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  • From Intelligo on March 24, 2012
    Hopefully Hermione tries out a witch?
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  • From newtothis on March 24, 2012
    ron does have a point his girlfriend should have told him, and ron and hermoine did not formaly brake up so she cheated on him, wish ron and hermoine would stay together, or at least have sex.
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