Reviews for The Life BondBy : newyorican |
Yes, the Dursleys do dserve retribution, but perhaps it should be from a matured Harry who has come into all that being the Potter Heir, as well as other names he's earned (whether he likes them or not), brings and the hard-learned lessions of his time in the magical world. I suspect his reactions under those circumstances would be most interesting. Particularly since his attitudes will also be3 shaped by his bond mate.
Some very nice touches in the first chapter that make a slowly developing relationship most plausible.
I like what I see so far are you planing anymore chapters after this or has this story been ended?
-Dauth_Daret
i like your approch on this story cant wait for the next part i hope you put it in where peatunia and vernon have to go to magic court after this dudley not so much he grew up watching how his parents treat harry and learned by watching if anything they should sent to azkaban and dudley mind wiped of harry cause of the bond i think you should set where mcgonncal tells the granger what harry been living and have them accept him really what parents wouldnt feel some obligation to show a bot kindness after what he went through protecting and checking on her before the incdent
A very good start to the story complete with a new bend on the Dursley's. Please inform me of updates.
Absolutely brilliant, would love to see this story finished it has such promise
Interesting take on this particular story, I always preferred the idea of HP & HG rather than the odd way it played out in the books, can't wait to read more definitely a good start. I hope the Dursleys get what they deserve (which isn't much). Am looking forward to see the rest of your story keep it up.
Love it keep it op
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