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By : Japhia
  • From bill560682 on February 12, 2012
    now how you can get the dursley family found after harry slips them drought of the living dead is have child protective services call on them about 2 weeks after the school year starts back because dudley has not shown up for school in 2 weeks or if you want them found sooner have one of dudley's gang members stop by after figuring out that no one is home to rob them and he finds the bodies. now since he thinks they are dead he decides to rob them of everything he can carry out then come back later and make a big stink about finding them and call the cops. an of course since the local cops have been dealing with dudley and his gang for years with every case getting dropped they think his freind is suspect number one an that the gang must have had some falling out an dudley was planning on ratting the others out so this guy drugged them an thought he killed them then tried to make it look like a robbery and throw the cops off of him by making sure he found the bodies. an since harry NEVER comes home for holidays no one thinks about the fact it was him. an sure this may not kill the dursley's but vernon would lose his job and at least one or more of dudley's buddies would go to jail and dudley would have to repeat his grade because in the hospital there is no one to bully into doing his work for him. an if harry slipped braclets on them with compulsion charms to always tell the truth and and a notice-me-not charm then they all should have a really fun time for the next few years while all sitting in jail.
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  • From bill560682 on February 12, 2012
    if i was harry as a good bye to my so-called family i would prank them. an yes i know magic is not allowed out side of school. who said anything about doing magic? that's what potions are for. just slip some drought of the living dead into their food and it is night night dursley family, an it could be days if not a week or more before they are found let alone cured.an harry's dear uncle would likely be out of a job by the time he did show back up to work. an i do not think anyone from vernon's work would care enough about him to stop by, nor would anyone else other then maybe mrs. figg but that is only likely to happen if she knows harry is at the house this christmas which would be a change from normal for that to happen since he has not been home the last few christmases. as far as time line goes it can not be christmas of 4th year otherwise harry would have to worry about breaking the contract for the tri-wizard tournament. unless this is harry trying to find a way to beat the tasks of the tri-wizard tournament but this sounds more like a harry is leaving the country story.
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  • From bill560682 on February 11, 2012
    well since harry is wearing 4 weasley sweaters then it should be right before 5th year. now since it does say m/m and 3plus i would suggest the creevey brothers as the members of the 3plus with harry. now since very little is known about the creevey's and their parents then they can be put into almost any setting. as we know the creevey brothers are some of harry's biggest fans and thereby would do ANYTHING for harry potter if only he would ask.
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  • From bloodshound on February 11, 2012
    off to a promising start. i look forward to seeing where this is going and what mark Har is going to leave as his 'Harry waz Here', mark.
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