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Reviews for Debauched life of Harry Potter

By : leenaleewitch
  • From bill560682 on March 23, 2012
    now personally i think the best way to pull off lily/harry story would be for james family to put their foot down when they find out that lily is with child. as a result lily is payed to go away and never return. she then takes the million gallions she is payed by the potters and sells it of as scrap gold on the muggle market so that it becomes 250 million pounds she then buys gallions with that getting 50 million gallions. she then leaves for america and sells the 50 million gallions in america as scrap gold and gets 12.5 billion american dollars which she turns into 2 billion gallions.an with that many gallions she can now buy her way into the upper crust of american wizarding sociaty. an of course they will figure she must be from a very old family seeing as they themselves only make about a million gallions a year so they will not think she found a way to get rich quick since none of they themselves have found it. so lily makes herself at home with the richest of the rich of america but still misses her james. so as harry grows up lily sees more and more of james in harry so much so she insists on calling him james and having him call her lily. she even has him sleep in her bed with her and come age 7 or 8 starts teaching him how to make her feel good starting with touching then moving on to oral sex, an by say age 10 or so out right sex with her thanks to an enlarging charm on his cock. an since he is home schooled no one has a clue about their private home life and harry has no clue anything is wrong with this setup because it is the only one he has ever known. lily giving him baths and sucking his dick clean after and then him licking her pussy and then pounding her pussy raw then fucking her up the ass an then having her lick his dick clean of her own shit is just life as normal around the evens house. an at about age 18 or so she gives birth to their first child which the purebloods more or less think nothing about since they themselves marry other family members as a result of forgetting to use birth control spells from time to time as well.
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  • From draechaeli on March 01, 2012
    I've always been a fan of cumslut!harry. Will harry ever end up going into the wizarding world? I must say though that in the first chapter you said Petunia died and the point of view was third person. but in the second chapter you said that vernon and petunia were seperated and the point of view was first person. which threw me off at first. If you ever need someone to read your stuff ahead of time and correct your grammer I can do that. I'll even explain everything to you so you learn too. Just e-mail me draechaeli@gmail.com. Keep up the good work!
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  • From bill560682 on March 01, 2012
    harry would be able to teach the creevey brothers everything he knows about being a proper slut such as the best way to give head by teaching them both threw 69 style. how to turn thier master on by playing with his ball and were the best angles are to get fucked are to make sure your master enjoys it best as well as you your self get the most out of it. plus things like butt plugs, dildos and vibrators not to mention things such as bondage and what words seem to turn masters on the best such as telling master 'that i am nothing but a dirty little slut that is your's to use as you please' or how to best beg things from your master such as permission to 'please allow your humble save to cum master, but only if it is your wish for me to do so'.
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  • From bill560682 on March 01, 2012
    as far as learning magic goes harry would only need to practice 2 to 3 hours a day at most. the main subjects are charms, transfiguration, defence and potions which they only seem to have once a week. so even with only 2 to 3 hours a day that would put harry way ahead of everyone in his year an even if the hogwarts students have each class twice a week at least one day would be totally theary and the other would be spellwork. an yes they would spend a lot of time on the theary because that would count for half your grade. one spell per class per week would be 40 spells a year. so if you learn one spell an hour which is longer then hogwarts classes likely are and 2 spells a day plus one potion a day by the time hogwarts is out for first year you have learned 3 years of charms, transfiguration and defence plus 4 1/2 years of potions. you are learning 10 spells a week which means you finish each class in that year in a month. so in 3 months you have finished all your charms, transfiguration and defence for the year. so harry should finish all charms, transfiguration and defence for all 7 years by christmas of what would be his 3rd year at hogwarts if he takes summers off. so he could now move on to things like runes and arithmusy so now with only 2 classes to worry about that would be a whole year every 2 monthes. so in 8 months he has finished 4 years, an there are only 5 years of those classes. so by about new years of harry's 4th year he should have finished schooling for all his classes for all 7 years. an yes i know i left out herbology and astronomy but if harry is being home schooled he is not going to have a magical greenhouse and unless he is going to pick his own potions supplies he does not need to know if mars is rising or other crap like that.
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  • From bill560682 on March 01, 2012
    personally i would like to see harry and the creevey brothers together. how you would pull this off is simple harry meets collin before collin gets his hogwarts an they become friends. once collin gets his letter harry tells him about being able to be home schooled. now the reason harry tells collin this is because collin and his brother dennis have been learning from harry how to become proper sluts. an once they find out about magic they can use spells to do things such as grow the creevey brothers dicks from 3 inches to 9 inches long.so dudley goes to school while vernon goes to work and shortly after the creevey brothers come over to practice spellwork for 3 hours then practice being good sluts for the next 4 hours or so. an since harry is a bottom slut in this story he is the one they practice on by doing everything they think a master would want as well as naving harry show them new things. an with magic harry could make sure his ass is always vergin tight.

    as far as learning magic goes harry would only need to practice 2 to 3 hours a day at most. the main subjects are charms, transfiguration, defence and potions which they only seem to have once a week. so even with only 2 to 3 hours a day that would put harry way ahead of everyone in his year an even if the hogwarts students have each class twice a week at least one day would be totally theary and the other would be spellwork. an yes they would spend a lot of time on the theary because that would count for half your grade.
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on February 16, 2012
    I like how Vernon was nice in this, and the family all got along. This was a Hot chapter and I can't wait to read more :)
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