Click Here!

Reviews for Writ on Water

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on March 31, 2012
    about #7...

    1. Damn, this the beginning had 'crime drama' written all over it, I almost
    expected them to drag her a$$ downtown for not giving the right answer! :-)

    2. These words popped up in my head during the second part, 'Trust...not an easy thing
    you say. Never thought the game of love this way you'd play, by the things you do,
    never thought these things I would go through with you. Pain, trickery, & deceit all the wrongs
    that you put me through, if you don't wanna say...still love you anyway...' etc.

    ..and for the record, yes, they're words from a song. Because when Draco started pressing Harry
    for answers about Hale, it was like the trust had been broken.
    Report Review

  • From bloodshound on March 28, 2012
    oh, oh draco. Next time LISTEN to that voice. it's there for a reason.
    i just hope he hasn't irreparably broken them. in trying to chase down reassurance, he's manage to alienate the one he wants. No telling which way har will bounce now.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SP777 on March 22, 2012
    about #6...

    *rubs hands gleefully* Ooo...now we're getting somewhere!
    Have I mentioned I love intrigue? :-)
    Report Review

  • From bloodshound on March 21, 2012
    oh, oh, that is sooooo not good. messing with time can come back to bite you in soooooo many different ways. So, it'll be interesting to see. is this memory wipe effect part of the latest twisted's power or due to the time bites. the notes too.
    well, at least har and malfoy aren't arguing atm.
    Report Review

  • From bloodshound on March 18, 2012
    keeping your parents AND har on side... good luck with that dray, but I get the feeling that might blow up in your face rather explosively. not to mention the philosophical differences he and har are having. and the new twisted they're hunting. I wonder if blue eyes will feature much in this one.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on March 15, 2012
    Hhmmm...So if this is a memory erasing Twisted, then was that floaty paper at the beginning being held by them, but the blanked out the person holding it so it just drifted down? I'm so confuzzled lol.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SP777 on March 14, 2012
    about #5...

    Whooops...and here we go again! :-)

    With a guy like Harry, it's going to be a never ending headache...and
    what happened to 'protecting the innocent' from those murderers? When
    you have concrete evidence they did it?

    ...such a freakin' conflict here.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SP777 on March 09, 2012
    about #4...

    I knew it! I KNEW there was something off about Nancy, now the question is..what exactly did she do? O_o
    ...and our man of the hour, Draco, would have picked up on it quicker and to think Harry doesn't want to
    obliterate their ass'ets off the planet. *tsk*
    Report Review

  • From bloodshound on March 08, 2012
    hmmm,I wonder what blue eyes gains by tossing such baits to har... and speaking of bait, do malfoys parents really expect him to leap for theirs? would he just give har over like that? I think not.
    Report Review

  • From bloodshound on March 01, 2012
    winces. wow, that's quite a difference in moral ground... and it's going to be a prob, i can see it.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SP777 on March 01, 2012
    about #3...

    Whooa! O_o

    When did this turn ugly? Oh. that's right...right about the
    beginning when Harry started channeling Hermione.

    What is wrong with him??? Not everything is cut & dry when it
    comes to twisted, my dear Harry, but I have to say both men are
    right AND wrong. Some twisted might deserve a simple capture, but
    somwhere down the road you ARE going to encounter a few where extreme
    force...or a permanent solution.. is necessary.

    I just hope both of them learn how to balance it out in the end.

    How would they act if they separated on the personal front, knowing how
    much they feel for each other?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SP777 on February 22, 2012
    about #2...

    Oh my God...is Harry about to get all self-concious about
    hunting twisted now? Shoot, that will hamper the need to get
    rid of the twisted completely if they pose a MAJOR threat to
    the Aurors, if HArry wants to be..I dunno..understanding of
    the plights of the twisted or some such nonsense.

    I say he needs to get a grip & I'm sure Draco agrees.
    Report Review

  • From bloodshound on February 17, 2012
    now that's interesting. why would the tapestry pull poor har outta bed. why would their colleagues start giving them the hairy eyeball just cause the haven;t announced they're dating yet either?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SP777 on February 16, 2012
    ''Morning star''..hmmm. Why does that name seem so familiar? I know
    I've heard of that before.

    Anyway, nice start...MacGeorge is going to be a nice lil' headache, though
    she seemed to contradict herself in her questioning of Draco, by acting like at first
    she was trying to get Draco to confirm her suspicions, then turns around & act likes
    she knows. I say...keep her in the dark, she only has her suspicions.

    By the way, curious to know what got Harry up at night...
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!