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By : Lomonaaeren

From Heartless93 on December 29, 2012
Firstly I am really glad Harry gained his memories back.

Secondly, I can fully understand people get confused about the order of the Cloak and Dagger-Series.
Can't you structure the outline of your profile page a bit more clearer?

Well, I am glad I found the right order eventually.

And thirdly, it was really time for the first kiss! *smirk*
If it wasn't that late (half past 3 am?), I would giggle like your typical fangirl. *grins*

Like last time, greetings from Heartless93

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From bloodshound on May 30, 2012
poaching... what the hells hinges did 'he' mean by that? har didn't ask to have nancy about so he had to end her... or maybe it's draco that he wants. Ah well, i'm sure we'll find out later.
ohhhh, he's going to make har take a brake. *grins. Awesome. Go Draco.
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From ANON - SP777 on May 25, 2012
about #14...

Oh, I'm sorry...did you run out of room typing which explains the
reason WHY the story ended abruptly at the good part??? >_
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From bloodshound on May 23, 2012
does this mean har can see her despite her memory traps now? I wonder why she wanted them to forget regulus. is she related to him? lol, har must be the only person around who has to relax into the imperious curse. :P
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From ANON - SP777 on May 10, 2012
about #13...

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From bloodshound on May 09, 2012
... how do you keep this all straight in your head? all this future past stuff is giving me a headache, and i'm just reading your story chappie by chappie.
anywho, wow, man, have they got a BIG challenge on their hands. how do you catch a memory altering, time twisting seer? does she have critter companions of any sort?
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From bloodshound on May 02, 2012
And he's back. tentatively back, but back. Not sure how draco is going to deal with his parents though. *shivers. those to are dangerous. Not as dangerous as the memory slicing, time slipping nancy, but dangerous.
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From ANON - SP777 on May 02, 2012
about #12...

1. You mean, does it have a connection to Lucius? No, not really.
Huh? No, no...I meant in general the meaning of 'morning star' basically comes
from the Bible regarding Lucifer (the fallen angel).

2. Okay, the first word that popped in my head, regarding the last scene, was
demon. Because if YOU think I'm going to believe that was a Veela...HAH!

3. You know, out of all the sequels of this Cloak & Dagger series, I think I'm enjoying
this one the most, with Working With Them being second, Sister Healer third and Letters From Exile
fourth. :-)

4. Oh yeah, the part where Harry was screaming I had a feeling you were going to do that, BUT I thought
you were going to do it towards the end as a cliffhanger...then I would have had to look for you & open
a can of whoop a$$. :-P But I'm glad that ordeal is over. NOW, let the reunion begin!
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From ANON - SP777 on April 26, 2012
about #11...

Well, I sure hope you explain that last scene, because you left
me like this.... O__O

Oh! I keep forgetting to mention this, I knew 'morning star' sounded
familiar to me when you first posted this, it was the name of Lucifer
when he was still an angel of heaven, before his fall. The question...is
there a correlation here?
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From ANON - SP777 on April 18, 2012
about #10..

I take it things are about to get nastier?
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From ANON - SP777 on April 12, 2012
about #9...

I think I feel sorrier for Harry, because Draco seems to be doing just fine! :-D
You know, I htought for sure you would have had Healer Portillo go to the other
Aurors in the Socrates Co. to confirm any suspicions she may have had...and killed
the doubt in Harry's mind inthe process.

Is it just me or is Auror Macgeorge somewhat 'nicer' w/o Draco there?
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From bloodshound on April 12, 2012
that's downright scary. having someone you love deeply just erased from your memories like that. still, that might be part of the reason har was pulled to the black tapestry. interesting how she sees draco as the dangerous one.
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From ANON - W on April 12, 2012
Oh my god... I really didn't see that one coming, even though in retrospect I probably should have... Not erasing herself from the mind of others but even other people, how devious...

I'm simply speechless... I can't find a way to describe the admiration I feel for your imagination. You manage to come up with things that have never existed before and tie them into the fandom, with partly familiar characters, to create not only something totally new but something that takes the whole fandom further... I don't know if I managed to say what I think^^ I probably didn't...

Oh well, let's just say that you are a genius and unique and a blessing to every devoted H/D shipper! And when you consider the way you tie plot with introspection and action, well, it's just unheard of... THANKS YOU!!
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From bloodshound on April 06, 2012
gooooooo draco! You dump that parental dead weight! Still, i'm most interested to see how the family tapestry and maybe the family black itself tie into this.
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From ANON - SP777 on April 05, 2012
about #8...

1. You know, I can definitely see Harry writing in a diary, 'Dear Diary Draco
is such an ARSE! Do you know what he said to me???...and then he said THIS..and
THEN he said THAT!!!' Yep, I can definitely see Harry doing that, which is why I think
that is completely hilarious! :-D

2. Draco can't leave well enough alone, can he?

3. I forgot something had called Harry a few chapters back...& why do I get the feeling that
The Malfoys DO have something to do with Nancy or it's possible they were associated with her
at one time?

..and don't think I didn't notice what was omitted towards the end there, I almost didn't
catch it. :-p I want to know if anyone else noticed...the question is why is it important for
Harry to forget THAT particular detail. Could Harry be a 'personal' threat to Nancy...or is
Draco a 'personal' threat?
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