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Reviews for Broken Dreams

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From Mrs_HH on July 28, 2012
    Hello.....I am waiting for the next chapter. I will not sleep until it is here. OK maybe I will but you know what I mean! x
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  • From moodysavage on July 27, 2012
    I LOVE this story. It took me several days to read it all but it is WONDERFUL! You have not rushed this story and I love the interactions between Hermione and Severus. It is so believable and fun to read. I love a vulnerable but still snarky Snape and you totally have that. Both your plot and characters are well developed and this has to be one of the best Severus/Hermione stories out there. Thanks so much for posting this and can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on July 27, 2012
    I love that Lucius was watching the television and that Hermione and Severus have gone public with their relationship. We all know that once Molly knows everyone else will soon. I can't wait for Hermione and Severus to have a reconciliation that I hope it is coming soon!



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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 27, 2012
    He'd better be ready to talk! I am glad the family's finally aired things out. I have to say, I am sure you wrote that thinking everyone would see Molly as a shrew, but I don't. I fully appreciate and comprehend her thoughts and fright. She may have been loud and shrill, but she was a mother once again protecting her child. Where is her proof that anyone in the Malfoy family has truly changed? I am not saying I don't believe Draco does want to be with her or that he has any ulterior motives, but I can see how Molly would feel. I liked her reaction to Severus, too. lol Lucius was interesting... Narcissa was amusing. But, now... I need another update because Severus has A LOT of talking and apologizing to do! Thanks, HG4eva :-)
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  • From anyesha on July 27, 2012
    dear author give the next chapter soooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..............................i can't enen breathe without thinking what's gonna happen next please please upload the next chapter
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  • From Madam_Snape on July 25, 2012
    Awwww Sev, such a troubled man. Makes me love him even more. Hun, your depiction of Severus' past is wonderful. It makes complete sense and pretty much anyone would agree that all this had really happened to him. Your character descriptions and mannerisms are always flawless and very true to the origionals. I am also looking forward to the meeting between the Malfoys and the Weasleys. LOL classic! Can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - hobbittt on July 21, 2012
    Loved it, and can't wait for them to make up :) Of course, what with all the Malfoys and Weasleys being at her house I'm kind of dreading that confrontation
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 20, 2012
    Howdy! Thank you for the update. I am really glad you are not leaving us hanging for too long. :-) While I feel badly for Severus' pain of his memories, I am so angry with him that it's overriding the pity. He hurt his "now" over a dead past. He basically kicked her out and broke her heart in favor of thinking about a dead woman that shunned him. Not that he's say it, but an "I'm sorry" just won't cover this one. It's time for him to step up for a change and do some of the work in this relationship, if he wants it to work. She may be young, but she's not stupid, and deserves better than some trite conversation that she's just supposed to accept. Always putting her feelings aside, so that he can be comfortable is not healthy nor fair. ARGH!!! I could smack him right now! Thanks again, hon! HG4eva
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  • From anyesha on July 19, 2012
    that was gr8 to the power infinity but please i don't want severus and hermione to fight over something.................hope they solve soon ............story is the best ever
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  • From mjc on July 19, 2012
    More! Please? It is so gritty and real and I love it.
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  • From Madam_Snape on July 18, 2012
    I was wondering when she was going to find out about Lily. I can't wait to see what happens next. Sorry I am so late in reviewing. It was brilliantly written as always.
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  • From Remarkable on July 14, 2012
    Oh my oh my oh my! This story has kept me RIVETED, positively, and I am just sick (figuratively) thinking what is going to happen next. I hope Hermione is mature enough not to pull what she did the first time, running from him, and from what you've written it seems to be she's grown up a little, knowing she needs to face him head on. She is a clever girl, but it does not bode well for Severus that this is the second thing he's kept from her that is important to their relationship and he needs to define it. I hope she demands a definition and that he steps up to the plate, but we can hardly hope for a neat tie-up closure to this little predicament in a properly written drama/angst fanfic story, can we? Heheh........ well, all I can do is wait and see. Wonderfully written and played!
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  • From ANON - FunnyDays on July 11, 2012
    Ahhhh--- Lily. I cant wait for the rest! One of the best Severus Hermione stories ever! You write them in an amazing way :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2012
    my favorite Severus and Hermione story
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  • From Cheesestorm on July 07, 2012
    Tottttaaallllyyy called the pairs in chapter 15.

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