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Reviews for Broken Dreams

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From anyesha on July 05, 2012
    hey don't disappear after giving such a wonderful and griping story please.................. chapter 22 please please............
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 04, 2012
    Another lovely chapter, even with her heartbreak. I know Severus feels he is in love with her, but after this, he MUST offer up some of himself and his own truths if he wants to hold on to her. I hope she gives him the chance and he doesn't blow it. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on July 03, 2012
    NOOOOOOOOOO
    How can you end like that?
    It's so mean!!!!
    Please write soon!
    I want to know what happens when Hermione gets home and when she confronts him.
    I can't wait to see what all happens and I hope it won't be long before I do find out.
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  • From Madamdragon on July 03, 2012
    Love is a dangerous game. To dangerous. You never know what is going to happen. Hope things go okay. Update again soon.
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on July 03, 2012
    bum bum bum... I can't wait to see her confront Severus about Lily! I am sure drama will ensue! :)
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  • From anyesha on July 03, 2012
    its so amazing really.........................................i am so happy about the new chapter......i hope hermione and severus can solve their problem........ love them soo much
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  • From anyesha on June 28, 2012
    please update soon i am figuratively dying here without the story
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  • From Madam_Snape on June 09, 2012
    Awww Hermoine finally told Ginny. At least someone knows. I loved how this chapter delves into Severus' past. (Sighhh)Such a complex, haunted, man, makes me love him even more. Hermoine is so supportive to him. I'm sooo looking forward to more, dahling :)
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  • From Madamdragon on June 06, 2012
    cute. Looks like there is going to be happiness and then some fighting at times. But I hope it all works out in the end. I hope another update is to come soon please.
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  • From Madam_Snape on June 05, 2012
    Your latest chapter is very hot! The cake part was very interesting (even though she did not rub it all over him like I wanted her to) and the interlude between Sev and Hermoine was intense as always. Ohhhh and when she said those three little words to him at the end of it, I was like awwwwww I just melted. I'm eager to see how he's going to react to that and his feelings about her. Is Hermoine going to let the cat out of the bag about her and Severus to Ginny and the others anytime soon. LOL I can't wait to see their reaction. Again, excellent chapter. I'm always eager to read your updates.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 20, 2012
    He's insatiable. I love it! I also enjoyed her letting go and letting him has his way. lol Then, his little temper tantrum cracked me up. Thanks for another lovely chapter! HG4eva
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  • From silversmith on May 16, 2012
    I never knew fanfiction could be this good! I'm checking back every day to see if there's another chapter up. Snape is so true to character which is rare in the stories I've read. Thank you for writing this! Please hurry up and write more!

    By the way, When Snape says "come for me" my head pretty much explodes. I may start a more-believable-Snape-sex-talk campaign, inspired by your fine work.

    I shall also try and think of a more catchy name for my campaign.

    THANKS AGAIN!!!
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  • From anyesha on May 15, 2012
    please next chapter............is needed ......................i am dying here for the cake....hehehehe
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  • From anyesha on May 10, 2012
    you r the best author ever .....this is captivating hope they get down and dirty soooooooon,..................dude i have fallen in love with them
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 09, 2012
    I can't help but love that cantankerous man. lol He's such a tender lover, but his inability to deal with others... poor thing. lol Hermione's patience will be tested, that's for sure. :-) And, I am glad you gave them some time for peace and happiness before things break down again. Thanks for the update, HG4eva
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