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Reviews for Broken Dreams

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From anyesha on May 07, 2012
    please need the next chapter dying to see what do they do next morning
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  • From anyesha on May 06, 2012
    you r bloody brilliant cant wait for more please write sooooooooooooon ........dude i am in love with this story..........
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 30, 2012
    Well, um... wow! That was... dayum!!! I mean, ahem, that was HOT, sweet, loving, tender, real and PERFECT. Thank you!! HG4eva
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  • From bayand on April 30, 2012
    wow definetly worth the wait
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on April 30, 2012
    damn talk about SEXY!!!
    this long chapter was filled with so much goodness that I seriously want Snape now more than ever!
    Can i have him?
    please, Please, PLEASE!!!!
    can't wait to read your next chapter
    btw I'm glad they finally got intamite with each other :D
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  • From JanisJ on April 29, 2012
    Thank you SO MUCH for writing so realistically (and with good style and grammar, etc)!! I've been getting sick of having a fanfic's girl's first time being awesome and pain-free-- or at least being fine with it and not calling a postponement. My first two times were anything but! Hermy's a lucky girl she got so much foreplay.

    I'll admit that I suck at writing reviews, but beleive me, when something really catches my eye I get off my ass and let my appreciation be known. I'm sorry that I've been faithfully following your story but hadn't written until now.

    Great job! I also have been loving how you keep the characters pretty much 'in character' and seek to make people have to think with your superior vocabulary-- it's one of the things I love about writing for HG, SS and DM that makes it authentic to use "big words"-- cuz they totally would!! (ha-ha, they read a lot and can be quite formal)

    Anyway, thanks for your contribution to the fanfic community..... it's certainly a gem :) May the muses always be with you....
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  • From Madamdragon on April 29, 2012
    Wow that was hawt. I hope more is to come soon.
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on April 29, 2012
    OMG! that was so hot! you made the wait completely worth it! Cheers!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 21, 2012
    That was a perfect fight and make up for the two of them. He never lost his snark attitude, even when he was unsure. And, she was sentimental and loving, while standing her ground and forcing him to talk to her. I loved it. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From anyesha on April 21, 2012
    u have met alan rickman............ thats wonderfull....... almost dream come true....please would u tell me how does he talk walk or even stand plssssssssss
    i want a detailes please .......u can email. me at annybanerlovesdaniel@gmail.com
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  • From anyesha on April 21, 2012
    u really should be a professional...............that was amazing soooooo sweet how hermione took him to eat.........dude....they r sooo in LOVE...........
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  • From Madamdragon on April 21, 2012
    Glad they made up. HOpe more is to come soon.
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on April 18, 2012
    lol Ladies love the green and silver! Can't wait for the next chapter! I want a reconciliation! and some smut! lol!
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  • From Madamdragon on April 17, 2012
    Had a feeling is could be Draco. Only he could afford such an expensive piece of jewelry. HOpe more is to come soon please.
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on April 17, 2012
    Awww this is so sad for Hermione and Serverus
    But funny for Ginny, Draco, Blaise, and Luna
    I'm glad Blaisr and Luna got together in a cute way.
    Post more sooooooon please
    I want Hermione and Snape to talk things out!
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