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Reviews for Broken Dreams

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From LadyOfTheNight on April 01, 2012
    Beautiful, I love your use of vocabulary! The chapter was very nice too! I loved when he was comforting her... very sweet!
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  • From Madamdragon on March 31, 2012
    That's soo sweet how he takes care of her. I hope more is to come. It is too cute and sweet.
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  • From SillyGreenEyes on March 22, 2012
    I really enjoy this story! I keep wanting Hermione and Severus to go further, and you keep teasing us by only letting them go a little bit at a time (Which is a good thing otherwise the story would go too fast)
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  • From Madamdragon on March 21, 2012
    Wonderful. Love this. Also how he made Harry and Ron cower at the mere sight of him. Also Loved it when he showed signs of possessivness towards Hermione. I hope more is to come. Also I am squealing like a little girl over this chappie. Happiness.
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on March 21, 2012
    lovely little smut scene. So sweet! can't wait for more!
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  • From Hardygirl133 on March 21, 2012
    *prostrating on before you* please...more chapters...must know...whats going to happen....0.0
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  • From extasssy on March 19, 2012
    Is it completly impossible to post a new chapter every minute?
    Can’t wait for the next one…

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  • From Lizski on March 18, 2012
    Fantastic! I can't wait for more!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 14, 2012
    Well, I certainly stand corrected. lol Good to know he really does plan to follow through. I look forward to the night he finally let's it all out. And, I look forward to seeing Hermione's reaction to it. ha ha ha Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From Madamdragon on March 14, 2012
    Yea I can picture Severus as the jealous and protecting what is his type. Love the update the drama and new professor trying to get into Hermiones' good graces. I am glad that she merely waves his advances off. Love that, hope she continues in that. Hope to see more updates soon please.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 13, 2012
    I so love long chapters. :-) Thank you for that. And, I truly enjoy his absolute denial that anything at all is happening between them. I am thrilled for her that she learned to pleae herself, as I think it will be a cold day in he!! before he actually consents to touch. her. lol Thanks, hon!! HG4eva
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on March 13, 2012
    too sweet! I love Hermione/Severus pairings! Your's is tops! LOL @ Hermione very subtly telling Severus that she liked him! it made me giggle!
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  • From Madamdragon on March 12, 2012
    Oh you know that she is slowly breaking down his walls. I think he wants to give in but is too stubborn. Hope to see more soon please. Thanks for the update.
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on March 10, 2012
    I just spent hours reading the fiction from chapter one to chapter eight! I am loving it and in your words, i can't wait for another update either! lol
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  • From pandabear on March 08, 2012
    It feels like I waited forever for an update then theres three....Im highly confused. I dont know wether your sorry for the wait, updating more frequently, or going to vanish for an undisclosed ammount of time again. Would the healing Severus did be considered magical tantric sex? I know alot of women havent had an orgasim even self mastabitory orgasim......but reading it makes a small(BIG) part of me want to cry for them.
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