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Reviews for The Descent of Magic

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Sera21 on August 31, 2012
    Oh my dear, you are so very very talented. Its like you have creative juices instead of blood. How do you come up with these new storys and ideas time and time again? I have read many storys but you always come up with a new plot or new way of telling it. When I consider I havn't read a sex-less fanfiction in many many years I don't regret that this one was the one to change that.Given, yes, I do certainly want a few scenes with them screwing like rabbits in spring time but I shall have to be off to peruse some of your others storys and see if I can read some smutty fun that way ;)
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  • From ChaosLady on August 25, 2012
    This is the end of the story?! I realize that it can't go much futher, but not even one more chapter?
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  • From bloodshound on August 23, 2012
    it's come out very well. It just goes to show that you don't HAVE to throw in limes, limons and lemons to create an effective and powerful drarry.
    I look forward to to whatever project you come up with next. Will the next installment of the mark of the fox series be coming out soon?
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  • From bloodshound on August 22, 2012
    So Phin was just being a pot stirring prat then. Fair enough.
    Nice to know it's not just the pure bloods catching it the neck for cruelty. ^^
    I wonder how Astoria feels knowing that in the grand scheme of things in her Ex's life, she's simply not that important. ^^
    nice one with Mio and Highfeather there Draco.
    I love the subtle dance between har and draco. No surprise Mio picked it up. She is VERY observant.
    Is it a challenge to build the relationship without lemons being involved? I'm liking the outcome so far at any rate.
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  • From SParker on August 20, 2012
    about #29...

    The both of them really are a bunch of saps, aren't they?
    Can't wait for them to actually act on it.
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  • From ChaosLady on August 19, 2012
    Interesting. I can't wait until the meeting actually starts.
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  • From SParker on August 12, 2012
    about #28..

    ''...and the cycle of healing FINALLY begins.''
    Though those boys will always be headstrong.

    Will this story be solved on the issue of house
    elves & families here or in another story?
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  • From bloodshound on August 12, 2012
    Neh, didn't har have black blood in him through Doria black? grandmother or great grandmother... can't remember which? so what is phinius rabbiting on about. I mean sure, Draco is a more direct descendent but har is still of the blood line.
    Heh, i doubt they'll be able to hide it from Mio for to long. She's just that smart.

    Yay for reconciliation! banzai! banzai! that's har and hugo sorted at least.

    Oooooh, and well on the way for reconciliation number two, Draco and Scorpi. Excellent. ^^

    so for the slow reviewing... i have NOT been healthy lately. Vertigo and dizzy spells are sooooo NOT fun.
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  • From moodysavage on August 12, 2012
    I just want to keep smiling after this chapter but thought it might be confusing if I just made a ton of smileys in my review. :)
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  • From ChaosLady on August 11, 2012
    I'm glad Draco and Scorpius cleared the air a little.
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  • From ChaosLady on August 08, 2012
    This definitely felt like a filler chapter.
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  • From SParker on August 07, 2012
    about #27...

    Finally! The Spark That Harry Started within Draco is starting to
    blaze! Who knows maybe we'll see that Malfoy strut, you know the one
    that proclaims he's 'cock of the walk'. The one that announces that
    he can take on Astoria & Scorpius any day of the week.
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  • From SParker on July 27, 2012
    about #26...

    I'm surprised Draco would feel insecure with being open
    with Harry. Because of the fact, they both were such fierce
    competitors...and they never minced words when they were younger.

    They've known each other for so long, you would think Draco would remember
    that.
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  • From bloodshound on July 27, 2012
    Har handled Highfeather rather well... arrrrrrgh. What a place to leave it. Now maybe draco will finally get out of the cupboard.

    Oh damn, they are just adorable together. It doesn't have to be all fire and passion to make it work. Quiet give and take and that happy buzz/glow from being around each other and patience with each other can go a long way. I don't know how long they'll be able to hide that happy glow, that spark they get from being around each other though.

    nothing like that hay seed look/feel to reel in the suckers. ^^
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on July 27, 2012
    Finally! The sexual tension was getting to me!
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