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Reviews for The Descent of Magic

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SParker on July 08, 2012
    1. You know, I've found..being a child myself once upon a time..that children
    still look to their parents, regardless of whether or not they want independence.
    Even if some children feel like their parents don't have a clue or don't know what
    they're talking about, deep down they want that recognition.

    With all that said, I think in Draco & Scorpius' case, something extreme needs to happen
    in their lives, where Scorpius suddenly sees his father in a new light.

    2. ...and wow, talk about embarassing, hope Draco can smooth talk that ackward situation
    into another direction.
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  • From bloodshound on July 08, 2012
    well damn. I KNEW everything was going to well har's knee wise. He was so happy to be free of listening to his bodies demands that when things started getting better he got over confident, ingnored the warning signs and oopsie over he goes, (speaking from personal experience... who me? Nevvvaaaaah. >> *watches my nose grow longer.) it will be interesting to see the fall out of this.
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  • From ChaosLady on July 08, 2012
    Oh no! Poor Harry!
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  • From Nyouko on July 05, 2012
    Ok, first off just found your story and loving it. I have read a few of your other reciews and I was thinking in some of them that ofcourse Draco got the troubled child. I am thinking that if Draco was not raised when he was or how he was he would have turned out just like that. I think that Draco could have changed if he wanted to but by the time he could his self esteem was just to low and he thought everyone would laugh at him or think he is just changing so he can stay out of jail and get his rep back up.
    Now I know alot of people are saying they have knee problem and I want to say that to. I broke my ankle and tore my ACL ligament (that is the one that keeps your knee from going to far back) in my knee and the stupid doctors did nothing for it. So now I have to keep in mind that my knee wont stop and if I forget that I will fall flat on my face (I have done that alot).
    So, anyways PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! Thanks for the story. I aslo find it funny that the thing that I have to type in at the bottom to review is stopain. It would have been better with two p's tho.
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  • From bloodshound on July 04, 2012
    Nice to see Al is a little less biased and more reasonable than Scorpi.
    What are the odds that Al and Scorpi will be or are MORE than just BF's and business partners... ;P
    i think it's har's genuineness that really gets to draco.

    That sounds just like Mio and is a very valid tactic. if you can make people see it's in their best interest to do something, then they'll be more likely to do it... or at least less likely to oppose you when you do it.
    I don't think anything but experience is going to bring scorpi round though.

    oh, i do hope Draco's there. :3

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  • From SParker on July 03, 2012
    about #20...

    *goofy grin* Daawww! Harry acts like he's going on a date! :-)

    You know, it's time for Potter & Malfoy to step up to the plate
    and confront their sons, in a true 'Put-the-fear-of-Dad' within
    them fashion. You know how it is...kids get besides themselves,
    parents have to be more frightening than God. :-)

    Besides this is Harry Potter, former Savior and Auror & Draco Malfoy, former
    Prince of Slytherin and Deatheater's son we're talking about, those titles have
    to be good for something.
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  • From ChaosLady on July 03, 2012
    Look like Harry's dealing with a lot of fallout from family dynamics. Excellent update!
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  • From bloodshound on July 01, 2012
    You write THE best scenes. '
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  • From ANON - Zip on June 30, 2012
    I like this story, great idea about squib and magic children theory, it is absolutly believable and I like Draco s and Harry s different perspectives, nature and behaviour.
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  • From SParker on June 30, 2012
    about #19...

    You know, THIS is the chapter where Draco could do a happy dance
    from not caving into Scorpius' spoildness. He conducted himself
    beautifully! :-) Good job author(ess).

    For a moment I thought you was going to have Harry go outside and
    take off like a rocket...running. It was something I visualized him
    doing once his knee was healed. I know I would, with my bad ankles.
    That's one of the things I miss doing, which is running {somewhat].

    Anyway, nice chapter.
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  • From TalisRuadair on June 30, 2012
    Sadly I fear that it will take much more than what Draco's currently doing before Scorpius to believe his father. I'm happy that things are starting to get better with Harry's leg and I cannot wait for the Drarry to start developing more. I understand that we're dealing with two stubborn wizards, so it will more than likely be while. Also, on a side note not associated with this story in particular, but I'm a fan of Hurricane and also the Conservation of Fame, which I didn't realize were written by you until last night. l
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  • From ChaosLady on June 30, 2012
    Excellent update!
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  • From SParker on June 26, 2012
    about #18..

    I couldn't help the thought that came to me while reading the beginning of
    the chapter, Draco has never been in love before and that's kind of sad, especially
    when you don't recognize the beginnings of an attraction...and think it's
    indigestion. :-)

    But, he definitely comes through in the end, doesn't he? He got rid of the curse.
    You know, you aught to classify this story as a romance/drama.
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  • From bloodshound on June 26, 2012
    gah... a memory effecting spell in there as well. no wonder har's knee was never fixed... still that would vidicate him to mio a bit more. anyone working on the leg would be fighting that... and if they didn't know they were trying to fight that it wouldn't give them much chance to fix it. so who'd har piss off to get that treatment.
    i thought bezoar were anti poison not anti all things tainted. and this line was a bit confusing. 'Potter firmed his legs around his leg as he extended it' Firmed his muscles around his leg? around his knee?
    at any rate. it sounds like har might be closer to claiming his malfoy than he thinks.

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  • From ChaosLady on June 25, 2012
    I'm glad they are making progress on Harry's knee. Update soon!
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