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Reviews for The Descent of Magic

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  • From SParker on June 03, 2012
    about #14...

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  • From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on June 03, 2012
    I really hope that backfires on Astoria. That made her look extremely petty, especially since what she revealed was something he said when he was much younger. I wonder if that will get Scorpious thinking in the right direction.
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  • From bloodshound on June 03, 2012
    ya know, as big bad dark secrets go... that ones pretty mild. If that's her best short, she needs to work harder at it.
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  • From ChaosLady on June 02, 2012
    Interesting. That wasn't as sordid as I thought it would be. It's kind of anti-climatic. Can't wait til the next update!
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  • From moodysavage on June 02, 2012
    I'm so glad Draco isn't totally humiliated by the newspaper article! I think it's good that he doesn't have that fear anymore and it's just like you said... now that it's out in the open... it wasn't as big a secret as it was in his own mind.


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  • From bloodshound on June 01, 2012
    it's a slow thing the de prat-erisation process, but in draco it's well and truly begun. he keeps expecting har to arc up and bristle and finding himself mentally flailing for balance when he doesn't. I guess there's some truth to the concept of flow like water indeed. It will be interesting to see if Scorpy does allow himself to change his mind and whether between them, har, mio and draco can change everyone elses. ^^
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  • From SParker on May 30, 2012
    about #13...[the last paragraph]

    Now, if I was Draco, with less restraint, I would be dancing
    on my toes like second rate ballerina. :-)

    I take it this story will focus more on romance? Since, you stated
    'no sex' in the summary.


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  • From moodysavage on May 29, 2012
    lol I loved how Harry told Draco out of the blue that he likes watching him... and Draco gave no real response... on purpose lol. It is such a natural and perfect example of what those two are like.
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  • From ChaosLady on May 29, 2012
    Well, we are making progress at least. Could we hurry it along please?
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  • From moodysavage on May 27, 2012
    I like that Draco wants to feel emotions and is gravitating towards Harry because he brings out his emotions... even though Draco doesn't seem to understand what those emotions are lol
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  • From bloodshound on May 27, 2012
    poor scorpy. He's got that idea very firmly locked into his mind, just like Astoria has her idea of draco locked in hers. There seem to be an awful lot of lock minded people in this fic. har seems to be the only one willing to expand his views unreservedly. I mean, draco is, but he's also horribly confused with all these odd, left over uncertainties lurking about him. I think it's good har makes him feel and it's even better that he brings har to life and (for the mo at least) is willing to lessen his pain until a more permanent fix can be found... or developed. har's simple genuineness is good for him. it's building up his self esteem again.
    i wonder what it will take to crack open the others minds a bit.
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  • From ChaosLady on May 27, 2012
    I hope that potion works for Harry. I can't wait til the next update!
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  • From RRose on May 26, 2012
    I love Draco's small expressions and reactions to Harry's happiness or at least happy reactions. I hope Draco and Scorpius can eventually form a better relationship.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on May 26, 2012
    i know cause am in pain every day yet i try not to over do it i hope that scropy and draco find a middle ground
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  • From bloodshound on May 23, 2012
    good luck with scorpy har... you'll need it. :P

    interesting... they appear to have roused each other's battle blood and each other in general. nothing like a serious challenge to shake you out of complacency.

    as for astoria... *studies her with interest. wow, who knew 'utter prat' was contagious and she seems to have a very bad case.

    Still, draco's battle blood is up too, so while he might not enjoy the bumps she sends his way I'm sure he's going to relish the challenge of the journey, both to get har's theory accepted and to get har's health (and possibly har himself) back.

    scorpy has become a rather side issue atm.
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