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Reviews for The Shards Of His Beloved

By : EvilConcubine
  • From ANON - wowgoshdarnit on July 30, 2012
    Like, pls, finish diss.
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  • From ANON - wowgoshdarnit on July 30, 2012
    Pls. Kill me. Diss is beautiful. ILY.
    Few errors but nothing big. Love it so much.
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  • From astarta on July 29, 2012
    oh noes! Poor Scorpius :'-(
    Hope he'll be OK.
    this chapter was EPIC! your description of what Scorpius's magic did made me read with bated breath.
    I'm hopelessly addicted to this story!
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  • From Sparrowbirdie on July 29, 2012
    Hi again! Thanks for another thrilling chapter. All though I haven't reviewed lately, I continue to follow your story. I like the way it has turned now.You raise some very important questions about child traumas and how they affect people in their adult lives. Draco comes across as a concerned father who is stuck in an impossible situation. It's quite credible. And I'm just sitting at the edge of my seat here, wondering what lies in store for Harry and Draco. When will they get over themselves and just kiss?!! I know it's a long shot, but I hope they end up having a baby together, one day. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - lividfire on July 29, 2012
    it was okay, I just don't see who could attack a slave(he's nothing now), why semiramis had to be hangover(I like the chapters where she's playing with jewels more;)
    but honestly I'm more intzerested in what happens after this in your story:D

    and long chapters are a pleasure to read:D
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  • From Jien on July 29, 2012
    I loved every word of it! i was hoping the chapter wouldn't end too because I couldn't stop reading but all good things must come to an end. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'd be happy if it was very long :D
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  • From Sera21 on July 29, 2012
    Good story so far, loving the details but wait....Draco bought his son 2 satin shirts and a silk shirt?? WHY??? I mean I get that this is the sort of thing Draco would wear a few years ago but its hardly the kind of thing a 3 year old would wear! neither of those fabrics is very breathable or comfortable for a little kid and it creases like a bitch. Ironing silk anything is no joke. Plus if you don't watch out they are very easily stained. 3 years olds like to run around and play and I have never heard of a 3 year old wearing silk or satin. very wierd. Why doesn't Draco just get him some sturdy cotton shirts? I mean I am not suggesting polyester but perhaps something where scorpius is not going to get teased wearing in front of other kids? Those shirts are not going to last long...
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on July 28, 2012
    Poor Draco... I am entranced in this story, it is fantastic
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 28, 2012
    Poor Draco!!! I hope those 2 boys get hard time for hurting Draco and scaring Scorpius!!!
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  • From pekolin on July 28, 2012
    I haven
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  • From ANON - XTonic on July 28, 2012

    Update soon! I love your fic and all angst and sadness. But it's also full of love.
    Please write more soon

    XTonic
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  • From astarta on July 28, 2012
    amazing story! Everyone has a personality and it's great!
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  • From ANON - redsky on July 27, 2012
    oh god...
    and here I thought the time of good Harry & Draco fanfiction was gone.
    now i know I was wrong. This is brilliant.
    people in your story look so human. even Harry with his hero complex doesn't look idealized. no one is one-dimensional and it's cool that you've accomplished it
    i love it.
    wow
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  • From Grey_Archangel on July 26, 2012
    I love it! Such tenderness between them! I really really enjoy reading your story. thank you so much for the long chapters and regular updates. and the plot.... wow!
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  • From ANON - Nubia on July 17, 2012
    Was fantastic, I'm excited because both Harry and Draco's feeling he awake feeling in love, okay more for Harry hahah I make me happy this chapter was very fantastic y thank you for you statement is true are different stories in the history, ''To find the missing lifeline''.
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