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Reviews for The Shards Of His Beloved

By : EvilConcubine

From moodysavage on May 10, 2012
I'm glad that Harry has been looking for Draco's son and that he is going after those that hurt Draco. It will be interesting to see how Draco reacts when he finds out. He'll probably call him a do-gooder and yell that he didn't ask for his help lol.
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From Grey_Archangel on May 10, 2012
I want to write a good and worthy review but i just don't know what to write to let you know how brilliant your story is! I loved every single word
more!
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From Sparrowbirdie on May 09, 2012
Thanks for updating, I've been waiting for this next chapter. Loved the part with Draco where he has a fit in front of Harry. Good for Draco, in a way. To get it all out, I mean. Loved the way you describe Draco's inner turmoil, it's so vivid and colourfully explained that I truly sympasized with him. I actually recognized myself in some of it, since I've had some breakdowns myself. Loved the way you described the 'spider' in his chest. Your words and the description gave me the chills. Had no trouble imagining his situation and what it felt like with it crawling on the inside. I find myself greatly concerned about Scorpius and his whereabouts, hoping there will be a reunion. If the boy turns up dead, I will actually be weeping in front of my computer. I also liked the part with the sphinx talking to Draco by his sickbed. Brilliant, loved the way you've spun historical stuff into the story. Just my cup of tea! It gives the sense of her being a real creature with lots of wisdom. Oh, how I wish that your chapters were longer! Anyway, keep up the good work! You are officially ranked as my current reading story on my profile page.
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From Ruri_Hiwatari on May 09, 2012
and by the way, your fanfic find the missing life line is my favorite H/D fanfic of all times. and let me tell you this story is beautiful too, hahahaha congrats, i think you are my favorite fanfiction author.
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From Ruri_Hiwatari on May 09, 2012
The Story is lovely, I love it, really, I cant wait for chapter no6, its beautiful i hope you dont
leave the story I really wish hapiness for Draco, and love the way Harry takes care of him, its a really
good story. congratulations and keep the good work
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From thrnbrooke on May 08, 2012
Now that's the Harry I've always believed in!!! Go Harry!!!
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From ANON - luvdreams on May 08, 2012
is Scorpius ever going to be found? If not is Harry ever going to tell Draco what people think happened to Scorpius? It's so sad if he's actually dead!!
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From ANON - liebe herz on May 08, 2012
I love Harry more and more! Now I see Draco's in good hands because Harry's going to take care of him
I love everything about this chap even if Draco's breakdown was very sad and almost made me cry
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From ANON - kat on May 08, 2012
I so hope that Draco gets his son back very soon.
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From ANON - Nubia on May 08, 2012
In this chapter, I felt sorry for everything that happened with Draco first Voldemort and now end up as SLAVE losing her son, hubo justicia for your parents Porque Harry penso que era lo correcto,now I need wait will happen in the history.

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From ANON - anon on May 08, 2012
i have been following this story because i am a hardcore H/D fan going on 7 yrs now.I like the premise and all the inherent possibilities in this world you have created and all am hoping for is a happy ending but the journey is also important. I hope you plan on making this a long read because i see this becoming a favorite.PS where is scorpius? and is there going to be ginny-bashing very good work...next chapter pweease
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From Grey_Archangel on May 05, 2012
how is it even possible that I haven't found your story sooner? Its so good! I love it how you describe characters and their emotions. Its so real and deep. now you HAVE TO update asap cause you've made it impossible for me to read any other stories. i want yours!
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From ANON - liebe herz on May 05, 2012
I. LOVE. IT! It's so exciting and intriguing. Im looking forward to the next chapter.
I love Harry in your fic. I love that both Harry and Draco aren't out of character. They and your plot look so believable
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From Sparrowbirdie on May 03, 2012
Wonderful, wonderful story! I so like the way you describe Draco's thoughts and feelings. Pleeease write more!! I can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm curious as to what's going to happen further on, are father and son to be reunited?! How long until Draco and Harry get it going together?! I just love the whole concept, and the idea of putting in a sphinx was just brilliant. Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Nubia on May 02, 2012
well I see the history begin to be interesting good job, please next chapter.I love your history.
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