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Reviews for The Shards Of His Beloved

By : EvilConcubine
  • From ANON - Fedia on November 08, 2014
    Please, please finish the story... Please??..?
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  • From ANON - Evinrude on June 20, 2014
    Please write an end to your story... Its just so good I can't believe it will be forever unfinished!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2014
    Trying to be a good person here and not read and run :P this is a great fic, you need to carry it on!!!
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  • From ANON - 4ofcups on January 03, 2014
    Once I sent you a review at fanfiction.net regarding your other story (To find the missing lifeline) saying that that was my favorite story of all times and I sure as hell youd reread it some time from then. Years have passed, I didn't remember the name of your story, but I managed to find it again by googling some main parts of the plot. Then I've reread it and came to see your other stories, and found this one. I'm in love with this one as much as I'm in love with the other. I've already read tons of fics (believe me!) and there's no comparison out there, you're the best writer I've ever had the luck to find. I don't know when was the last time you've posted here, but please please plase don't stop! You're really awesome!

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  • From ANON - Fedia on December 28, 2013
    I sent you a message a few days ago on live journal, but I am doubting wether you finally received... Basically I was trying (as hard as I can) to convince you yo write a new Chapter for The Shards of His Beloved... I was reading it when you posted a new chapter each week more less and have been waiting for the new one ever since... Would you please write this story... for another 50 chapters or so? ;D
    "please, please pleaseeeeeeee!!!"
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  • From ANON - Why on October 21, 2013
    When are you coming back. What happened to you!!
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  • From ANON - Tsuki on November 24, 2012
    Hi, I'm brazilian, so forgive me the lack of fluence in ur language. I really expect u ro go on with this story, because it's really well written. Waiting for the next chap.

    Do u intend to find the death eater who is draco's rapist? And how do u intend to explain his pregnacy? I think it's important to understand why only he could bear a child, even if that are other gay pureblood couples.

    My congratulations.

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  • From ANON - Ashley on October 10, 2012
    This story needs more chapters! It is amazing, please update soon!:)
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  • From ANON - RoxasElric on September 27, 2012
    More? Please? your doing an amazing job and i really want to see this story go all the way through.
    RoxasElric
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  • From ANON - JennyPenny on September 23, 2012
    LOL I LOVE the sphinx ...Blackmailing Harry Potter=Awesome. You are right, there is no doubt that the sorting hat would have put her in Slytherin. Good job! I had a hearty laugh reading this chapter. I do love the way you are doing a slow build up, even if I can't really see any forward progress on Draco's part. That's a little frustrating, but it is realistic. By the way, I really loved reading Draco's POV on the whole infiltration of all things Muggle into the wizarding world. I think that was possibly the best bit in this entire fic (thus far).
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  • From ANON - JennyPenny on September 23, 2012
    Interesting :) Glad I found this fic today. I was in need of a good read, while I take the weekend off from my own stories.
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  • From TempestLore on September 23, 2012
    I think you are doing a phenomenal job with this story! I am really enjoying it. Keep up the great work and I will continue to read it. I would like to give you one small piece of advice, and it's one that all authors have to learn, as I too made this mistake until somebody told me. Head Hopping--don't do it. It's jarring to the reader. Try not to change point of view too often. Try to stay in one head through an entire scene. When you do switch heads do it on a new chapter, or if it's mid chapter, do a hard line break so readers know that you are switching the POV. Your writing is great! I love the details you put in and I love this plot. I feel so bad for Draco, losing his little boy and then being raped. I am intrigued! I write Dramione, but my guilty pleasure is Drarry, even if I don't like writing it, I do love reading it. LOL Good job! Update!
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  • From ANON - Ruri Hiwatari on August 31, 2012
    Im missing this story >o< I really want to know what happen, I hope you update soon, sorry for writting these
    but Im really curious of what is going to happen, and good luck with the trip
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  • From ANON - RoxasElric on August 27, 2012
    Need more chapters!!! Awesome story and I can't wait to see where it is headed!!!! Keep it up!.. -RoxasElric
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  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on August 22, 2012
    I love this story so much!

    Is Draco going to get pregnant with Harry's child later on in the story? I hope so, that would be so cute. I love male pregnancy stories.

    Cant wait for more!
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