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By : KusanoSaku
  • From bloodshound on December 04, 2012
    har must have had a hella good natural glamour to hide all that from poppy. either that or poppy just didn't care.
    i can see draco being very important in har's future. har's never had anyone to love him utterly before and draco will never let him near the dursleys again. in fact, i'd be very surprised if something unfortunate doesn't happen to dumbles and the dursleys both.
    draco will be good for him. help him restore is zeroic confidence. it's so much easier to have self confidence when there's someone outside willing to show you that they love and think you are beautiful.
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on November 30, 2012
    and the lightbulb clicked on for draco finally lol. and so much awww, draco's so sweet and good to harry. you did a wonderful job with the whole talk and everything. keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 29, 2012
    Very romantic with Draco reassuring Harry that he was still beautiful in Dracos' eye. He was so thoughtful reminding Harry all he had gone through & still won out. It made my heart hurt & brought real tears to read what he had gone through in his young life. How can anyone be that cruel!!! (even if this was in a story you still read about similiar in the news every once in awhile).
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  • From ANON - Helen on November 28, 2012
    When will the nextart be u?
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  • From ANON - sablerose2 on October 31, 2012
    Loved this story and can't wait for the next update!!
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on October 20, 2012
    The story so far is great! Poor Harry! Still getting hurt after everything that has happened to him... Please update soon. I love your story. If you would like to keep in touch, please email me @ kat.baby.fun@gmail.com.
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  • From PeriLover on October 20, 2012
    Once again, another outstanding chapter! Thanks for your hard work!
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  • From bloodshound on October 18, 2012
    if ronnikins is in his right head, he's just screwed himself over viciously. ain't nobody going to care about a jealous bit player like himself... except that he injured the 'savior' and attacked two other students. That's not something i'd want to be remembered for. Considering how good at strategy you have to be to play chess, ron certainly isn't thinking worth a lick and now that his family is about to boot him, dumbles will probably drop him like a hot rock. He has no future to speak of. I'd keep track of him anyway though. he might well end up with the strength of desperation.
    I wonder if mio will switch schools too.
    I still say dumbles is being very short sighted. having influence over the BWL means power and when he junked har, he junked that too.
    Har will have a lot of healing to do. I hope Remi, luc, sev and draco are up to it. even mio might start getting back in touch.
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on October 18, 2012
    i've honestly read ones that were even worse to poor harry, but hopefully after all his suffering will come all the good stuff he's been missing, and he is surrounded by people that love him whether he's willing to admit to it yet or not. keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 18, 2012
    Fine chapter. Got things set up to move everyone out to Malfoy Manor. Now let's have some interaction again please.
    Pushy, agressive, greedy probably...but I am a faithful, loyal & appreciative reader also.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 16, 2012
    Holy cow! What a rampage...and permanent scaring? Can't there be some ancient charm or something that would fix Harrys' eye and Harrys, Draco & Hermiones scars? I really think Dumbledore has something to do with Rons' behavior.
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on October 16, 2012
    I want to see blood! He will party for this right?
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  • From PeriLover on October 16, 2012
    First, you rate Outstanding, as in all your works here! Poor Harry. I'd like to see Ron drawn and quartered! Dumbles too! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on October 15, 2012
    just got caught back up with this. all ican say is yikes!! you certainly aren't letting harry off easy in this story are you? poor boy just keeps getting more and more wailed on, at least he's got people around to love and support him. only goof i found in this last chapter is with the two ingredients, you forgot to include a name or mention them when poppy was giving her recap to kingsly, it said something like "it was covered in - which left..." personally i'd just make up a couple things, pick a random animal and body part lol. keep up the great work, can't wait to see what happens
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  • From ANON - Sailor Sol on October 15, 2012
    Just finished Chapter 17. Outstanding!
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