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By : Sparrowhawk
  • From ANON - Wolfcathope on June 02, 2013
    Love the story I am glad you are back more please
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on June 02, 2013
    this story is about harry wanting to be punished for all the lives lost that could not save. i would think he would go to the living family members to get such punishment, namely dennis creevey for not being able to save collin and such or susan bones for not being able to save her aunt or luna lovegood for not being able to save her father.
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  • From ANON - Amu on May 12, 2013
    Angel of the darkness somehow fitting...but not the perfect description
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  • From ANON - Amu on May 12, 2013
    Probably it's just me, but I think it's somehow funny, how even your short version of sadismus/masochismus demonstates the domance of the Dom over the sub. I don't know, if it was intended, but "D/s" somehow emphases the dominance of the D over the small s. But I am probably just interpreting too much :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2013
    kinda obsessed with this! lol. Keep writing though!!!! :D
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  • From ANON - Amu on May 12, 2013
    Hmm...just 8 chapters :(
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  • From ANON - Amu on May 12, 2013
    Hmmm...so Snap shares his subs with Lucius and draco...
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  • From ANON - Amu on May 09, 2013
    Hmm...it's weird, but it somehow makes sense that Harry would be a sub and a maso...
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  • From ANON - ceara on May 08, 2013
    Wonderful story. It feels so real. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mal on May 04, 2013
    I reaaally hope you're still working on this!
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  • From ANON - Anti-Form_Sora on May 02, 2013
    Okay. I had to tell you this. Last night, I had a dream that Harry and Snape were in their relationship and that Harry begged to get fucked by Snape and got his wish. Then my alarm went off. T___T
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  • From ANON - nox_lumen on May 01, 2013
    Hooray! I just spotted that you have new chapters since my last review. I have so much feedback that I hardly know where to start.

    First, I actually took a bit of time to research belladonna in terms of how it was used through history(flying ointment, poisons, eye drops)as well as scientifically/medically (twilight sleep) and between the berries being described as pleasant tasting and sweet as well as the intentional uses the plant was given, I feel that you did brilliantly with the toxic gas, weaving fact into the magical fantasy world you are working from.

    I am also quite happy with the way you have handled the story so far, and seeing my review responded to in an AN made me sqwee just a bit. However you also asked what I could share about submission and other topics covered in your fic. the very best thing I can recommend to feel it out is to dip your toe in the water. Though Harry as you have him as well as Severus represent a much more extreme end of D/s then I would go in for, when I first realized whatIi was curios about i read loads, both fanfic and non fic explanations, but my best understanding did not actually come till I worked up the nerve to try a bit of dominating and a bit of submitting. An evening with someone you trust and fuzzy hand cuffs, with clear rules can be extraordinarily helpful, even if you ultimately decide that you would rather read it then do it.

    Psychology can be useful, however it is not unheard of for psycologist to decide they are smarter than we are and find the teeniest tiniest evidence in any case study to reinforce their personal conclusions. Remember that Freud got paid a very large amount of money to tell the world that everyone has sexual urges for their parents and that Dr. Spock had never actually raise a child when he told everyone that we were doing it wrong, and if you have ever dealt with a child raise as he wanted you may also find his lack of experience shows. Close to home, in first grade I had a psychologist decide that she knew better than my mom or me, and that I had to have been molested by my stepfather and the woman would not let up for anything. For the record, though he may not be a saint, my stepfather NEVER would have done such a thing to me, but I finally got so fed up with the badgering that I told her what she wanted to hear and explained it to my mother after we left the office, but not before poor mom had the scare of her life. Always seek conflicting psychological views on a topic, and keep in mind that it's a science of probability, rather than solid inflexible fact.

    Check fetish web sites for what people who live the life say for a wider perspective. Though pornography is a presentation of fantasy with actors playing roles and editing for moments that won't be as fun on film, actors will also do "making of" segments, and you are also writing a fan fiction set in a fantasy world with magic and unicorns. If your work includes a bit more eroticism than realism, most readers will let it slide. Also bear in mind that many(though by no means all) erotic M/M fictions(fan or original) are written by women with very dirty minds who do not have penises or prostates to fact check with, though can still present work that gay men can also enjoy. If you feel you are offering something you like, as well as showing the initiative to ask questions and research, then you should do just fine in the long run.
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  • From ANON - wolfcathope on April 30, 2013
    I like what you did just watch the pace of their relationship don't drag it out for to long.
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  • From Meechypoo64 on April 30, 2013
    I loved this chapter actually. It helps Harry see that Severus will be there in whatever capacity he needs and is slowly helping him come to understand that there is nothing wrong with his reactions. Having Andromeda on his side and understands the kind of relationship he might be interested in pursuing will also help him come to his ultimate decision and set him truly on the D/s path.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Anti-Form_Sora on April 30, 2013
    Wish I could have posted this earlier, but that was epic. I was at school reading an earlier chapter of this and thought to myself that I should check the status of some of my favorite stories and BOOM chapter 8 of this was up.
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