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By : Sparrowhawk
  • From Woodlandspirit on April 30, 2013
    Hooray for updates! Question, Harry pulls on his hair sometimes, is that not considered hurting himself, or is Severus only concerned with big hurts like cutting and not eating?
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  • From ANON - AchillesTheGeek on April 30, 2013
    Ooh! I asked for more and here it is!

    Really enjoying this.

    It's interesting reading the comments about masochism/self-harm etc. At one level, it's good to discuss; but also, your story isn't a polemic about the D/s lifestyle, it's a story about particular people with particular needs , in particular relationships, that may or may not be well-described by these terms. I guess this is part of being an adult fan fiction: the reader may be expected to be intelligent and critical, accepting that the views of the characters will be from individual points-of-view, not from a psychology textbook.

    OK, enough soap-box. Loved it. Please keep going.
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  • From truthseeker on April 28, 2013
    Looooooovvvvvveeeee it please update soon! I wanna know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - AchillesTheGeek on April 28, 2013
    MORE PLEASE!!!
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  • From marie_enigme on April 09, 2013
    Just found this little gem and I can't get enough! This is a wonderful story :)
    I don't know if that reviewer or someone else cleared up the distinction between self-harm and masochism for you so I'll try to be clear and to the point. Masochists like the pain, some even get off on it. They feel pleasure at the thought of pain, of someone hurting them (and at the actual pain). This can be viewed as kink, and can be practiced in a controlled manner, as in a D/s-BDSM relationship, or not.
    People who cut, or otherwise harm themselves, don't like the pain for the sake of it. They use it to stay grounded, to cope with reality and the circumstances that make them feel out of control. There are many reasons why one may start harming himself. Of course these people may also seek relief in a D/s relationship, but this is not often the case, as self-harm doesn't mean the person is necessarily submissive. This is the simplest distinction, I hope I helped!
    I wanted to ask you how often you update and if you have some kind of schedule? Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon ! :D
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  • From Anti-Form_Sora on April 08, 2013
    Yay more yummy updates!!! Sorry that you weren't able to update for a while. Hope everything gets better. Loved the chapter, especially when Snape bit Harry. Can't wait for the next chapter. Many happy, yummy chapters to come.
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  • From BAFan on April 07, 2013
    Ch. 7

    First (before I forget), I believe Tonks was a Metamorphmagus, not an Animorphmagus.

    Second, was that Abbas guy a total idiot? I mean, he *publicly* made indecent remarks to someone and then physically assaulted him when his lewd advances were rejected - all in front of the store owner and her assistant, not to mention a child, and expected to get away with it??? Also, Harry seems to have lost some of his wartime instincts; otherwise, he would have kept his wand within easy reach, especially since Teddy was with him. Is that somehow related to the depression he's been experiencing? Is Snape going to have to order him to stay more alert or something?

    I admit that I'm struggling a bit with this story because the extreme (to my mind) sadism exhibited by Snape and Lucius isn't really my cup of tea, but I am interested in the basic premise and think you've presented Harry's turmoil very well.

    Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From djaddict on April 07, 2013
    Yeah! New chapter. Oh so brilliant!

    The biting was super hot.

    Half of me wants Severus to sweep him away and tie him to his bed until he agrees to become Snape's forever. The other half loves this wonderful dance they have going on.

    Enjoying!
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  • From jujukitty on April 07, 2013
    awesome chapter! the fight scene and snape to the rescue and all angry defender, just awesome. keep up the great work, can't wait to see what happens next :D
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  • From ANON - wolfcathope on April 07, 2013
    more please, I can see Harry getting hurt again. Especially if he walks in on Sev, Lucius, and a another sub. I see him handling Sev and Malfoy together fine but another. Is something going to happen to Hermonie and Ron?
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on April 06, 2013
    Sigh I am forever enchanted with your story. I hope you are feeling better and that life is taking it easy on you. Good tidings and blessed be. -Darkness
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2013
    wonderful! I love this story and I am so glad that you updated it. It has everything I want in a story and now I want more. Please update soon! Great work!
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  • From magentah on April 06, 2013
    So excited to see an update! And to see that you're (maybe a little?) feeling a bit better. I'm bipolar--the sort that results in being mostly depressed most of the time--and definitely understand the debilitating crush depression can have on a life. Take all the time you need and be gentle with yourself.

    That said, the chapter! Severus coming to Harry's rescue! Eeeeeeee! Adorable hopefully-not-too-traumatized Teddy Lupin! I don't know why I'm telling you what you wrote, I'm just so excited and in love with all the things! Except for the bad guy, and not knowing who sent him (Severus-in-my-head is correcting that to "not knowing from whom he was sent"... I think I'm overtired). However, we DO know that he was hired by someone, which at least confirms the conspiracy theory. Looks like Harry's ready to admit to Severus what he wants--at least, I certainly hope he can say it if he's already calling the man Master (although given the circumstances, it'd be understandable if it was a slip; but in that case, I'm then worried about Severus and his reaction). Yay! I thoroughly enjoyed the update as well as the excuse to reread the entire story. Looking forward to the next chapter with no agenda or expectation for when it arrives. :)
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  • From Meechypoo64 on April 06, 2013
    Damn good thing Severus came in when he did. Harry is definitely a lot closer to becoming Severus' real "pet" and allowing them to enter into a full D/s relationship. And aren't we the lucky ones that get to read all the juicy details of such!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Woodlandspirit on April 05, 2013
    Yeah your back! I'm sorry you were have a rough time, I hope it gets better for you and not just because I love the story ;) Hope you can update again soon!


    P.S
    I Love Teddy's nickname.
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