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Reviews for Punish Me

By : Sparrowhawk
  • From djaddict on June 07, 2012
    Need. Next chapter. Now! lol

    I like that Snape could see right through him.

    I have to wonder... Was what happened to Ginny related to his nightmare or was it really Death eaters, etc?
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  • From YaoiGirl on June 07, 2012
    Ah, thank you, thank you, thank you so much for updating!

    Oh, and sorry for not reviewing last chapter!

    I really like this story, and how Harry is slowly discovering who (or maybe rather what) he is.

    And probably the best thing with the whole third chapter I think was Snape's reaction when he noticed the cut. Just straight out healing it and then ordering him not to do it anymore! :) Hopefully that will show Harry that there is a differense between just harming yourself for no good reason at all and masochism. I really hope (and believe that is the point of this story) that Harry will realise this and then go to Snape and let him just help him deal with all thise emotions he's going through now.

    Anyway, great story, great chapter, and please keep going! :)
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  • From WingsofaDream on June 07, 2012
    You asked for constructive critism at the beginning on this story and what I'm about to write is intended as such. However, it's an issue I'm sensitive about and so if I come off a little harsh or flamie, I apologise in advance.

    So, third chapter, we see Harry hurt himself with a shard of glass. Fair enough, he's gone through a lot and he's in the sort of mental state that can lead to self-harm. What I take issue with is that you're directly linking his self-harm to his kink. Really? You're putting a serious mental condition on par with how someone gets their jollies on? I know you don't realise how utterly offensive that is (or at least I hope you don't) to both self-harmers and submissives. I know you said that you're basically taking a fanfiction look at submission but maybe add a similar disclaimer about the self-harm as well, or even better do a little research on self-harm and ammend that bit.

    You probably won't and you'll probably disregard this review as a flame. Like I said, I never intended it to be. You have a good writing style, no spelling or grammer mistakes that I noticed, and the plot of your story is overall interesting. You are doing a good job, you just need to be a little cautious when dealing with sensitive issues.
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  • From iononhapaura on May 21, 2012
    I'm very intrigued by your story... I think it's a wonderful idea and I look forward to reading more
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  • From jami_lee on May 21, 2012
    This is going to be mean, but YES GINNY IS DEAD!! Sorry I don't like Ginny. Great story
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  • From magentah on May 21, 2012
    Absolutely love this so far. Sub!Harry is my FAVORITE, especially when paired with Severus! (and Draco, and Lucius, and.. ;D) Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for sharing this!
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  • From moodysavage on May 20, 2012
    *snorting behind my hand over my mouth*

    yeah... gotta' admit... (and stop laughing at the irony of it) when you mentioned a character death it did cross my mind 'please let it be Ginny'... even though I didn't think it would be her because authors always leave her annoying self in because she's as easy target to add drama... albeit an annoying target.

    I'm so GLAD that problems in the story won't be including Ginny claiming Harry! Yeah!!!!!

    That dream totally creeped me out too when Harry was being attacked... my house is way to dark right now and I could so picture that nightmare. Very good with the description there.
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  • From draechaeli on May 20, 2012
    Interesting. Keep up the good work!
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  • From sarah999 on May 20, 2012
    Wow, thanks for the super quick update. : )
    I loved Harry's nightmare/dream; was the Master in it Snape? Sure seemed like it. Is this going to be a Severus/Harry pairing, or will there be more added?
    I look forward to the next update. : )

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  • From draechaeli on May 20, 2012
    Not a bad beginning. Keep up the good work!
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  • From PandaGaara on May 20, 2012
    All I can say is I LOVED IT!! UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I seriously can't wait for more and to see how Severus takes it.
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  • From sarah999 on May 20, 2012
    Love it, love it, love it! It's so good; I love the interactions between Harry and Draco and how Draco knew Harry is a sub.
    I really, really, really hope you update soon. : )
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  • From djaddict on May 20, 2012
    Oooooh! Sounds yummy so far.

    But, you know you are kind of evil for stopping there!
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on May 20, 2012
    This really got my interest.
    I like how Harry doesn't just give in and is at first reluctant.
    I can't wait to read more and see how this goes :)
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  • From moodysavage on May 20, 2012
    I liked it :) You actually did a really good job with the flow of the story and setting up the personalities of the characters. Since you asked (but not because it was necessary) I would have liked to have seen more hints that Harry was a sub before Draco figured it out. It would have been more fun to see that stretched out a bit more :)


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