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Reviews for Punish Me

By : Sparrowhawk
  • From ANON - Aidan on November 23, 2013
    Please update this story. Its so fantastically written i wish i could read more. I love you're writing style.
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  • From ANON - mazama on November 02, 2013
    Hello!!
    First of all, thank you for the great, oh so great story !! I really like it ^^. The plot and the writing are really good. Also, I like the way you present the different characters. I hope you will continue updating regularly because I really look forward to reading the next chapters!
    I also wanted to offer you my services regarding the french lines in this chapter. ( and eventually any other chapter in need of translation.)
    You see, I am a french native speaker, and althought I can see you really worked hard on these translations, most of the lines are weird or really hard to understand. Or sometimes, it's fairly easy to understand but the word order is all wrong for example. In most cases, I understood what you meant by making the reverse translation doing a literal word-by-word translation.
    So, if you wish me to, I would gladly translate all your lines in french. But don't worry; the fact that the translation isn't perfect doesn't alter the quality of your story in any way, I assure you, it's just a little disturbing for french native speakers I guess. I wouldn't have dared make the offer if I hadn't seen your comment at the end of the chapter. Anyway, here is my e-mail in case you are interested ; mazama_28@hotmail.com, just send me a quick note and I shall be happy to help you ^^. Thanks again for your writing, Mazama.
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  • From ANON - Blind apprentice on October 19, 2013
    Hi there,
    Just wanted to say I enjoy this story. I don't speak French, so thank you for the translation!
    Hope to see a bit more soon, perhaps?
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  • From ANON - TANIA on October 17, 2013
    PLS NEW CHAPER .... TWO MONTHS PLEASE.... THIS STORY IS EXCELENT PLS
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  • From ANON - Voliegirl on September 15, 2013
    OMG! This is such a HOT story! I love your version of Severus, think I've fallen in love. So controlling, absolutely the perfect Dom. Please update as soon as you can!!:)
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  • From ANON - Dragon lady on August 29, 2013
    Love the story can you start an email list for updates or something
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  • From Luna on August 27, 2013
    i really like this story. but you should update it again.
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  • From Mashkai30 on August 25, 2013
    Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From Diane on August 24, 2013
    I had to wait a moment after reading chapter 11 before I could comment because it's too good. I just came across this fic and read all of it as quickly as I could. I am very impressed with your writing style, characterizations, and explanations about the D/s lifestyles (and well just everything). I'm very excited to see you write more and to see how their date goes. I'm also curious to see how Harry handles the judgement he's sure to encounter at some point.
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on August 24, 2013
    at least Ron didn't give him too much crap about the gay thing. Blushing Harry is too cute
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  • From ladilyndi on August 23, 2013
    I like this story. I am not a Snape fan by any means but I like the Snape in this story very much. He's human without losing the essence of who he was in canon. I look forward to its continuation.
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  • From Tryagain4me on August 23, 2013
    Solo excited forthe next chapter!! I hope Severus doesn't turn around
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  • From ANON - ichi on August 23, 2013
    Hi !

    I started to read your story about three hours ago...and couldn't stop :). It really is an amazing story, and I hope the following chapters will be there soon !! Can't wait !!!
    And I'm actually French, so if you need help with this language, I'll be glad to help ! There are a few mistakes in this chapter, let me know if you want me to correct them :)
    (French is terribly difficult, everybody has trouble with it. Even the French themselves.)
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  • From serialcabbit78 on August 22, 2013
    Good Grief Harry!!! You know you want him... you can ask for punishment... ASK FOR PLEASURE TOO!
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  • From ANON - wolfcathope on August 22, 2013
    Love the story glad to have the update, I am sure Harry will keep both men on their toes.
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