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Reviews for Magi in Paradise

By : Sleeping-World
  • From EdTheBeast on May 14, 2019

    An intriguing excellent story!


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  • From joey888 on June 08, 2012
    If you wanted ideas for the next chapter I would either say Tonks and Andromida (Maybe make it reluctant cause Andromida is already married)

    My other idea would be Hermione, but with Hermione being a muggle she would have no knowledge of the magical world so Harry would have to put her in her place.

    Really, I just want Harry to be a bit more forceful, never take "no" for an answer.

    Really am enjoying the story and hope you write more
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  • From bill560682 on May 30, 2012
    i would like so see the adding of the creevey brothers as magi rose is of the royal family and thereby can pick them to join the magi, also there will likely be many women and girls an this way harry or the creevey brothers could double or even triple team them.
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  • From bill560682 on May 29, 2012
    now you did state harry has a sister rose so i would love to see harry/rose harry/rose/lily and harry/lily.
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  • From Sera21 on May 28, 2012
    Please add the warning PWP ( porn without plot) to your warnings. Also, I realize that its pure smut and that you are ignoring things like logic but at least have them use some lube for anal sex and have him clean himself before he has sex with somebody else. I mean Eeeew, I don't want to be imagining a shit covered dick in some girls pussy. that is pretty gross.
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  • From joey888 on May 27, 2012
    That was perfection
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  • From Clinique on May 27, 2012
    I kinda wanted the elf and Lily to have some action together.
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  • From joey888 on May 25, 2012
    I truly love this story even though it is at such an early point.

    A scene I would love to see if the Delacour's hosting a party and Harry claiming all the family at the same time (Gabby, Fleur and Mrs Delacour and Mr Delacour if your into that). Would be cool if Harry was dominate as well (takes no shit)
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  • From bill560682 on May 25, 2012
    i love the harry/lily part and harry as dominant since i have no clue who is in this magi world and who is not i will stick to cannon people. harry/susan/hanna, harry/fluer/gabby, harry/collin/dennis are the ones i would want to read. i think you should add a listing at the top of who is having sex in each chapter to help the reader find the pairings they like best faster. an i hope this harry will not be taking shit from anybody.
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