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Reviews for Reap the Hurricane

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Sp777 on July 17, 2012
    Well, I'm typing this on my phone...and it sucks. Anyway, my second and third thoughts on Bill Weasley a *minor* misfortunate *ahem* accident. Yeah its evil, but damn the werewolf has to go...besides he's only a minor character and youknow those minor characters are Always the first to go......I COMPLETELY agree with what draco said about hermione and I'm glad its mentioned in this story, not everyone needs her, especially how she butts in to give her Superior opinion. I've always felt people like her just stomps on folks independence or make people doubt their Own ability to make good choices....lastly so the white sheep(?) Makes an appearance. Oh by the way, I think Draco needs a cool nickname with those claws of his...too bad 'WOLVERINE' is taken. :)
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  • From SParker on July 14, 2012
    Yeah I can definitely see a part two of this story, you
    have too much going on...or you just simply adding chapters
    up to 25.
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  • From bloodshound on July 14, 2012
    wow! Wild magic induced monkey limes. 0.0' Going native/rapid adaptation at it's finest.
    Welp, at least the seeds are growing. I wonder why it appears to be effecting Bill more than the rest? Maybe due to the latent Wolf tint in his system? Will Gin begin to experience some alteration? Maybe for someone whose magic has already settled, it takes repeated dosages. Then again it might be a genetic thing. Most interesting.
    I'm glad doesn't want to just cut out on them. They still need him for the mo.
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  • From RRose on July 12, 2012
    Epic end to this chapter. I felt like screaming "yes finally!".
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  • From bloodshound on July 09, 2012
    interesting. i wonder how it's effecting the rest of the group. are they being altered too? I imagine it's effecting har and draco most as they're the ones who use their new talents most.
    Crap. that bond must be scaring the cacky out of har. Another thing he never asked for and one that not just ties him to malfoy but urges him to place malfoy in a position of most important. I hope har doesn't try and fight it for to long. it can't be good for him.
    having his magic become like an entity in and of itself must be scary for malfoy. the only other one who might be able to relate is bill though i doubt the two would be comfortable talking...
    I'm surprised that no ones thought of what long range effects being on a new world might have on a magic touched. From the descriptions to date, it's going to be a pretty heavy one.
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  • From SParker on July 09, 2012
    about #11...

    Well, that was..sudden. O_o But, I know you got an explanation
    somewhere. By the way, is it just me or is Bill a danger to the
    Red Clan? He seems entirely too hostile....and I get the feeling
    bad things are going to happen soon with him.

    ...and since I can't remember where I read it, Hurricane has two moons?

    By the way, you're really speeding along on this story...2 chapters in 5 days?
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  • From moodysavage on July 09, 2012
    I find it interesting that they have finally taken the step to kiss each other but have both avoiding even thinking of anything intimate like that.
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  • From SParker on July 06, 2012
    about #10..
    You came with it. :-)

    Personally, I'm thinking their 'link' is unique to them alone, as
    opposed to others IF they become connected with the wild magic also.
    Was it hard to get this scene together...and I have to ask after
    all this time, was English something you majored in at school..and writing
    your strength so to speak?

    Can't remember if I asked that.
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  • From RRose on July 06, 2012
    That was an interesting thought Harry had at the end, I guess the rest of the family should be thankful they have Teddy to keep Harry around.
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  • From bloodshound on July 06, 2012
    it seems to be exaggerating most of the traits of those touched by the magic.
    Wow, now that's one heck of a battle rush. won't they need fuel for their bodies though even if the world their on helps fuel their magic?
    Well, bill has the meat he wanted. :P that should keep em going for ages.
    I hope har will be content to settle a bit once he comes off his battle high/ hunting rush. The others still need his help. The planet is doing wonders for Malfoy too.


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  • From bloodshound on July 04, 2012
    guess they're adding a plus one to their party.
    *hums "Something (dangerous) in the air tonight," and then switches to 'A hunting we will go'.
    Good thing Har and crew built into the hill. Far less easy to knock out. I wonder how long it will take those bird things to be wary of the new predators on the block.
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  • From SParker on July 03, 2012
    about #9...

    ..and she dares to leave it at a cliffhanger (of sorts) what the
    hell..what tha' hell. Man, I feel like whining right now! Where's
    the action! :-(

    I'm almost tempted to ask you, if you could put two chapters in one.
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  • From moodysavage on July 03, 2012
    oh wow... I hope it's just the one bird but I bet there are babies! Interesting that Harry didn't realize they had a werewolf in the group.I wonder who else knows.
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  • From ANON - Larimar on July 03, 2012
    I'm really enjoying this story. You're a truly accomplished story crafter! The upcoming battle is going to be awesome, and the link Harry and Draco are forming is really interesting.
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  • From TalisRuadair on July 02, 2012
    What a way to end this chapter. Leave us hanging why don't you? *pout* I want to know what happens. I really hope that Harry or Draco don't get harmed. However, I also wonder if the bird has regenerative properties and if it would have all it's claws or if the other one was the female and they are now facing the male of the mated pair. If they have this nest of birds, how many more are potentially on Hurricane? As always I look forward to your next chapter.
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