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Reviews for Second Time Around

By : gypsysue
  • From bloodshound on June 01, 2012
    this is turning into something that is drowning in 'Sue' age or possible 'Stu' age since it's about a male. Sooooo totally Mary Sue (wiki will explain if you don't know what that is.)
    Still, some times an unashamed and well written 'Mary sue' can be fun since the brain doesn't have to work much. Sorta like reading a mills and boon. You can just sit back, suspend your disbelief and enjoy the ride.
    At any rate, this is one of those fun ones, so I'm going to continue reading.
    ty for something light to break up the angst and drama I've been reading. ^^
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  • From djaddict on June 01, 2012
    Good start!

    Loving it so far.
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  • From coopershawk on May 31, 2012
    It's a good story. Would you mind changing the font back to the one in the first chapter. I found the font in the second chapter very hard to read. Thank you for writing this story.
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  • From bloodshound on May 31, 2012
    off to a good start though the abrupt shift in font between page one and two was rather startling. page two font was a bit harder to read.
    anyway, it's nice to see someone beyond the golden three and crew doing a time walk.
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  • From jami_lee on May 30, 2012
    I like your story. I can't wait to read more.
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