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Reviews for Because you heard me right

By : Velveteenbunny
  • From ANON - Jo on February 28, 2013
    That was an interesting dream for Hermione to have. :) I hope you post the next chapter soon.
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  • From MissMisc3 on January 20, 2013
    Fascinating. More to come?
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  • From moodysavage on July 03, 2012
    ah...and the focus changes :)
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  • From pinkmoontribe on July 02, 2012
    Wow..... nice dream! It was nice to hear Snape open up ! Keep upvtje great work
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on July 02, 2012
    HA ha ha! When I was reading the dream sequence i was thinking, man this is a bit rushed but super hot! than I realized it was a dream and I wanted to curse Ginny for waking her up. I think that if the dream had gone on a little longer maybe Hermione wouldn't have thought it was a nightmare... lol

    Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From pinkmoontribe on July 02, 2012
    Wow im breathless at the vision of Snape playing the violin! I love it....mmmm thanks for updating. The story js great. I love Snape laughing at her from cursing hhehe. U think hermione will get Snape a secret Christmas gift? Does hermione know much about music in urbstory?
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  • From demonsangel on June 29, 2012
    I just wanted to point out before I moved on to reading chapter 4, that in chapter three you re-posted the paragraph from chapter two about how Snape refuses to shop when the students shop. It is right after when he sat down for the quiditch match. I was unsure if this was intentional or not, so I figured I would bring it to your attention. Good story so far though.
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  • From guiltypleasure on June 21, 2012
    I'm enjoying your story and look forward to more chapters. That Luna is one smart cookie, poor Severus didn't expect her to nail him. :-)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 19, 2012
    This is a very interesting story, so far. I am intrigued by her innocence and his anger. I think they will both have to relax A LOT for any movement toward one another to occur, and I look forward to seeing you pull it off. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From tbird1965 on June 19, 2012
    Hi, I'm a refugee from FF.net. This is sooo good, I'm really intrigued. I don't know if you've noticed or not but you have a duplicate paragraph that needs to be deleted.

    I can't wait of the next chapter!!
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  • From moodysavage on June 19, 2012
    I LOVE this!!! I think Snape is so sweet in his thoughts. He may be totally angry and annoyed at himself but he can't help how he feels and I loved how he had a tiny bit of hope because she didn't snatch her hand away or look at him in disgust when he helped her stand up. I love how you are writing these two and I'm so glad it's showing up here on aff!

    One side note... periods and commas go on the inside of quotation marks... just for future reference on any new stories you might be writing but it doesn't hurt anything at all :)
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on June 19, 2012
    I am liking this so far! thanks for sharing here! I can't wait to read more and hopefully soon!
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  • From AeonFlux4444 on June 19, 2012
    Ok! I'll be waiting for your wonderful story. Do not delay, I hope to be like 100 episodes. Your imagination captivates me. Bye.
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  • From onecelestialbeing on June 08, 2012
    glad to see you here!
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  • From demonsangel on June 07, 2012
    Welcome to AFF! Just wanted to let you know that this sounds like an interesting story so far. Though, one of your words did not makes sense. It was at the beginning when you were describing what Snape was imagining. I think you were going for "fetal" when describing Hermione in bed. If not, I apologize for bother you ^^ Looking forward to seeing where this is going. Also, when she apologizes to professor Snape, there seems to be an extra latter before the ?
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